Naruto Another

Self-Published

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Description

Amidst the chaos of an ongoing civil war, Amegakure must send potential shinobi to the island Point Break, where a brutal and grueling test known as"The Mock Exams"is held annually. Among the nine chosen to compete is Noboru Kosutta, whose father—the powerful head of their clan—has set a dangerous condition:

Noboru can only take the exam if he awakens his dormant doujutsu, the Kiidogan.

Alongside Noboru are Ayano Kaguya, a slave determined to earn her freedom, Ooyama Kusakyu, a deadly puppet user from the influential Kusakyu clan, Kaede Akinoyo, a wealthy bureaucrat with unrivaled ambition, and several more.

As they fight for survival, these nine warriors will be pushed to their limits. In a world full of grueling hardship, and death they must learn to rely on one another if they hope to survive.

What to Expect

-Naruto Another is an AU (Alternate Universe) to the Naruto story. All characters are OC, and some clans may appear in other villages than they did in the original manga.

-The first several chapters are from different POVs. There will only be5POVs at the beginning to establish the prologue.

-Upload Schedule MTW 3:00 PM EST

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Asentum

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 12
Views: 5,797

Chapters(33 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

BlareRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall, the story was great, with good characterization, style, character, and grammar.
The style of the story stood out as one of its major strengths. It featured a well-crafted introduction that effectively set the tone and provided necessary context, drawing readers in from the very beginning, and reading it wasn't that much of a great task since the story was rather easy to read in the grand scheme of things.
I see that the story was written in multiple points, but due to its nature, I see that there would be no point in judging it too far, still, so far, the characters' development of our protagonists is good.
I have no complaints about the grammar. I see no mistake about it, and everything on the story, like mentioned before, smooth rather nicely in the grand scheme of things. The flawless execution in this area contributes significantly to the story's polished and refined feel.
Although the characters are different in their own ways, I see each and every single one of them as a lively entity. Each character has its own live, personality, quirks, and their own goals. Sure, it might not be everyone's cup of tea, but I think this is one of the good fanfictions
John Stax (Fobywoby)Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I’m not usually into fanfic, but this one’s a solid read. The world-building is well done (tension and a good sense of atmosphere). It’s got a nice balance that keeps things moving while still feeling immersive.
The characters stand out. They’ve got real personalities, believable motivations, and a good mix of strengths and flaws. The dialogue works and it is natural and flows well, without feeling like it’s trying too hard to be clever. It’s hard for me to judge, as I have never read or watched the fiction that this is based on (I know, that’s insane as I am a huge anime fan). This is my first time reviewing any fan-fic and am not as familiar with what to look for in the genre. But I can say that the writing felt well done and the writer communicates well.
The pacing is decent. The action scenes are solid, and the quieter moments add some nice emotional depth.
Overall, it’s well-crafted and has a lot of heart. I can appreciate the effort and care that went into this. With a bit of cleanup on pacing and transitions, it could really shine. If you’re into fanfic, especially something with strong characters and a vivid world, it’s worth a look.