NARGOTH
Self-Published
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Description
Many years ago a mutant got a second chance to save his world or destroy it. he was transported back in time in order to change the future read as he goes on his rampage cough i mean voage to save humanity.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- dyload
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 904
Chapters(1 total)
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- RznRoyal Road★★ 1.5This is a block of text with no editing and a strange issue with commas being represented with \\\' which makes me wonder if it was pasted in from some other editor and not checked. First things first, a copyedit and formatting would make this so much more readable, as it is chunks of text are filled with run on sentences and other issues. While it is a stream of consciousness retelling, the narration is plain and flat with smiley faces in the middle. Altogether this is a jumble and it is difficult to read.