Myth/Real

Self-Published

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Description

A boy who was lost.Fate and fortune has given him a second chance to live in a world that is between [Myth] and [Reality]. A world that is [Virtual], yet it lives and breathes like the [Physical]. A miracle within a miracle.But there is no miracle without a price. There are forces moving unseen beneath the surface. When the lines blur, there will be no bystanders.A/N: Any references to fiction/games/literature belongs to their respective IP owners and not me. Any resemblance to real persona is purely coincidental.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: RazgrizKL

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 204
Views: 130,546

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

AnarchyDevRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Read the present 2 chapters and needed to write a review here for only those 2.. The Chapters are written nicely and the Story may have been the same, but the way of expressing it entirely different. Hope for more regular chapters written with the same vague feelings and maybe at a later stage uncover all the MC's history.. Do read this story!!!
SaphyronRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This review is based on the first 2 chapters.
I am bad myself at grammar, but I could not see any glaring mistakes.*
The prologue is really nice and interesting to read. The first chapter really generates a feeling of realness.
The style feels comfortable to read.
The story is believable.
The Main char and the side chars so far, while not many and much said about them have a good future ahead of them.
saganatsuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Having read the first arc: the only real issue I have with this story is that during the first arc, it uses two characters early on mostly to introduce us to combat. Unless these two characters are going to be used down the line I would recommend going back and using nyakka and her two friends, to better introduce them. Narghel, in particular, I have almost no memory of, and could use some characterization.
GreyDragon0Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I personally like it. The author doesn’t go crazy on game mechanics like most do with this genre.
I found no glaring grammar mistakes. I like the MC with how humble(Normal?) he is. Not some super genius or dark gamer. Just your average comatose patient trying to establish himself in a new world.
I like the romance and the battle scenes aren’t that bad or great. Although the Harem tag is off putting. I haven’t seen him actively try to form one with half backed side sluts.
Overall style is not bad could use some work with battle scenes. They just don’t catch my interest, and it personally feels like the author is more focused other areas than fighting.
Other than that I recommend this to anyone that wants a light read to fill the time between other story releases
copypasteRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Have to say, One of the better stories, Not my taste exactly but it kept me reading it even thou its somewhat “not my taste, but still not bad enough to stop reading”.
I say 4.5 points for the story, To be honest, I would give it 5 p if it there was a bit more in depth about the company & conspiracy, but I guess that’s for the later arcs.
Arc 1 feels like an entire story, from start to end, A somewhat short length story that actually would have a great ending, best of it all is that It has another Arc, So we get to know if it will keep the quality up!
I hardly believe that you can keep the quality as you had in Arc 1, but if you ever manage to have same quality or better in Arc 2. I will change my review to 5. Simple as that, You could had ended story at Arc 1 but alas you Didn’t which seems AWESOME =) I love lengthy multi part stories. Let’s hope it’s as awesome as First Arc.
Do I say read it? or read it?
I say:
Read it!
P.S.
Reason why for low style is for one reason, I disliked some of the combat scenes… they were boring in my eyes… I skimmed through them, but otherwise the style itself is awesome, Just that the combat scenes weren’t in my taste but don’t worry, its just my taste, not that they aren’t badly writen So keep the good work up!