My Villainess Plans Were Ruined by my Brother!?

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Description

I woke up to find myself in the body of a villainess in one of my favorite games, but instead of panicking, I remembered there was a bad ending where I can get my favorite character and kill the heroine, but my brother, the fat siscon who spoiled her younger sister, responsible for the villainess' victory, changed!?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: slowassupdates

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 40
Views: 31,817

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

erowarriorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
it was a great story
the plot was unique and the characters special
write very well and you can love every thing about mc but till chapter 5
after that the plot jump to much that i begone debut doubt i reading the right story and i check it 2 time :|
you try to make it dark and make it mystery and that is what ruin your work
you try to make your writing better so i suggest rewrite from chapter 5-7
make it easy to understand ,add a little more detail and also don't focus on one character
if you fix those it become a great story
mc have a very good character
the plot was good
i like how the mc is self center and have a high pride
but character setting lack detail
if you wanna create a good character try to simulate every single thing about them , what is their favorite food , what is their hobby what they like and dislike ? what is their fetish and ...
and also remember not even a single thing is perfect , so try to change the setting of stella
you try to create an idle person in the game but change it completely in realty and it make her not likable
she has divine protection of many god is good looking kind are acceptable and actually very good but trying to fight for every one is not , make her a little selfish and add thing she's not good at while other can do those easily
ps: i need to rewire this review to its so messy :D