My Thoughts Exactly

Self-Published

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Description

Ryu, a teenage boy with no respect for social norms, is starting his education as a magician; however, starting alongside him is his sister Ruri, a devil (in his opinion) who loves nothing more than to tease him and make his life miserable.

A shameless boy, a sister who keeps him on edge and a city of students full of hormones. What could go wrong?

Oh, and the world is at war.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
226
Views
63,858

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • CBlack47Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I was cracking up at this, yes the MC is a horn dog and sister is as well.  My inner and outer pervy self was laughing.  I also use speechify to read this to me as I read it and didnt have a problem at all!
    Would love to see the story continue!
  • HexwolfxRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Things I liked
    1.Intresting sex acts for the MC
    2.Neat idea with how magic works
    3.loli sis
    Things to work on
    1.Faster ch release
    2.More world building its really lacking in some parts like abit of lore fore magic are even what country they are in.
    3.some on work on grammer
  • NeedsMoreSoySauceRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Your writing is beautiful.
    I look forward to your writing.
    I wish I could write like you.
    You write how I feel, even if I can’t express it.
    Your writing inspires me.
    This piece of work is absolutely amazing. There's perfect use of comedy mixed with euphoric elements distorted in a fantasy world. Every chapter brings a smile to my face.
    If only the aurthor could release more to satisfy his fans.
  • cheeseisgoodRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Well written and interesting even though not much has happened with the plot as of chapter 13.  So far its about a magical school to train mages for the ongoing war.  Some unusual motivational techniques are used by his sister and teacher but its ok because... game of thrones.
  • drizzRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Good grammar for RRL standards, some errors but nothing major and a long shot from distracting from the story.
    I find the writing style to be solid, but that's hard to judge objectively.
    The story/plot is mediocre so far, while some scenes are described in wonderful detail others just lack the vibrancy needed (for me) to fully immerse one (myself) into the story. The one time skip that I've seen until now was placed awkwardly and made me wonder what happened in the skipped time as there was no summary or similar. Also, IMO you went a little overboard with the teacher thing, but this is an erotic novel after all so I guess I can't complain.
    The characters are drawn up well enough, I'm not sure if I like the whole princess & maid thingy though. In any case, the characters are consistent in their interactions, and that's what matters.
  • InfantryTerminatorRoyal Road
    0.5
    Characters:
    MC is a horny teenager in rebelious phase that only knows how to curse and get horny. Whole promise from description is thrown out of the window as soon he bangs his fully blood related sister, and gets ordered around by extremly annoying woman. Everyone else either is stoned 24/7 or posses personality traits that are needed to start sex and carry relationship
    Grammar:
    Nothing to complain about here.
    Story:
    It doesn't exist. MC doesn't have anything to do besides getting ordered around and filtring with his sister. Worldbuilding doesn't make any sense, magic is unexpailed mess that can be only described as "It just works". There are no stakes or anything interesting besides two sex scenes.
    Defenitivly not worth time, especialy because author wasn't active since 2018. It's like any anime themed story when a weeb tries to write a story for the first time, and then drop it once he runs out of ideas. Wattpad is filled with those