My System Powers Up my Crew Not Me
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Bang is transported from Earth into a world where pirates and adventurers rule the land and the seas. They are bestowed power from leaders after swearing fealty to them.
“Welcome owner, to the world of Mundu”
“What? Are you a system? Did I reincarnate like those characters from novels?”
“Yes owner, I am here to help you”
“YES!!!!!, what cool powers do I have? Do I control gravity? Can I use all the elements here? Oh! Oh! Can you help me master all kinds of powers?!”
“No master, I can only power up your allies”
“What???????”
"Please follow my instructions to assemble your crew."
This is not your regular power fantasy. Well, it is a power fantasy but not on the main character. The main character completes quests in order to recruit crew members or power them up. This is kind of a slow paced novel because character development will be a big factor in this story. Kind of new to writing so any criticism will be welcome. If you want a reason to read this novel, read the spoiler below.
*****SPOILERS****** the crew doesn’t get powerful with no reason. They get powerful only because of character development so expect some emotional scenes for breakthroughs. See if you could spot the progression of emotions in the crew, and how it affects their powers
Disclaimer : I do not own the pictures I used in creating the cover
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- KangarooCruz
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- 3.5/ 5.0
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- 14
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Chapters(3 total)
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- pewpewcachooRoyal Road★★ 2.0I like the story idea, but the story itself is hard to read. The writing is harsh, the grammar seems okay though. That being said, the story itself is only three chapters and so far I don't like the MC at all. Also the dialogue between the MC and the system needs work. It just doesn't flow well.