My Supers Online

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My Supers Online - DarkCX

Robtic Heroes - DragonsunXX

Super Delivery - GoblinFister

The Left Behind - OmegaDusk

Alex stood where he felt to be on the top of the world. Blamed for something that obviously, obvious to him, was not his fault Alex's world came crashing down around him when he was forced to take blame. Everyone blames him, and after seeking opportunities elsewhere his only choice is to go back to the game that condemned him using a new avatar and starting from the bottom.

As Alex starts to dig in at a city where he feels he can attain fast progression things don’t seem to be right. The game just feels off. Stuck Alex has to work hard to get more powerful, find out what’s going on, and survive.

*Author's Note*

This story is an anthology that is a collaberaive effort.

Right now the release schedule is as follows.

Our schedule will be on a as completed basis for the time being.

Thanks for reading!

Thursday - My Supers Online (Darkcx)

Friday - Super Delivery (Goblinfister)

Saturday - Robotic Heroes (Dragonsunxx)

Sunday - The Left Behind (OmegaDusk)

Even though these stories are not directly related to each other they all take place in the same world and the events build upon each other. Some of you might recognize a few characters from DragonsunXX’s Dungeon Robotics.

**The Chapters published for Robotic Heroes contain spoilers for Dungeon Robotics**

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: DarkCX

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 167
Views: 107,129

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Community Reviews(5)

HedoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Wanted to jump in and be first! Other than that I didn't see any big grammar errors on the first chapter and the characters, the main and his friend, felt like their backstories have been thought out. A lot of the elements I saw have been done before, but I only know a few that use superheroes and MMOs so we'll see where this goes. I plan to update this review when there is ten chapters out. I hope I can speak as highly then as I am now.
Over ten chapters later and still finding this an awesome read. All the storylines are interesting and different. I plan to keep up with this story!
PeaceinourTimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love this story! Favorite character story is Left Behind with Vesta. I can't wait for more. Omega needs to up the chapter-length though, I get to the end and can't wait for more. The other stories match up and chatter in the comments leaves me with anticipation for when these stories collide. Waiting with great anticipation!
ThatchyPlayer16Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I am currently reading dungeon robotics by DragonsunXX and I am thoroughly enjoying that. For the same author to have a collaboritve input into this story is very intersting to me and it makes for a good read.
Other than that, I like how having the different segments from each author gives that different style for each chapter.
Overall quite a nice start to the story.
The-Anti-AkumaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I honestly started this just because Regan shows up in it, and I am enjoying it so far. I just wish there was more Regan!
I'm curious where this corruption thing is going, and quite enjoying the story so far.
StomachfoodRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
So I’m only a few chapters in and here’s what I’ve noticed. Your grammar is good with very few large or obvious errors that detract from the reading. Story is decent but very rushed and compacted and not really fully explained in detail. Characters also seem decent but rushed and not completely fleshed out.
Basicall the a lot of the story comes out sort of rushed and there will be a few spoilers here. First off you give us almost no physical descriptions of items this prevents me from really immersing myself in the world cause I have no idea what your pods and systems are meant to look like. I have no idea what the main character looks like other than that he can’t walk. In game i have no idea of the characters lookor any of his items or even how the virtual world looks. Basically you give almost no description of things just saying that they’re there. Description isn’t always necessary like with the goldys cause they are just your basic thugs. But for key items and characters like the glasses and the MC it would really help.
Other than that is your very first upload/chapter seems like you had lots of info and fleshed out ideas and were given a page limit. You have basically 3 plot points you can make into their own chapters but instead like some sort of essay you tried to cram all that info into a page or 2. Start out with his banishment from the game as it’s own separate chapter because it’s the whole reason he starts any of this and give it a lot more detail like how he reacts, the corruptions looks, the councils looks, etc. then make another involving him looking for a job and his assault (which doesn’t make a lot of sense it’s small growing start up that he’s applying for not some megacorp so there should be some form of reprocussion for the beating or at least explain why there wasn’t one) and fully flesh it out. Then you’ve got his decision to get back into the game which you can make into a much larger struggle and make it seem more difficult than you did.