My sad isekai into Warhammer 40k
Self-Published
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Description
This is my first story that i am writting i welcome all critics and anyone that can help me with reference material and maybe art work this story will have gamelit system it is warhammer 40k i do not own the rights to warhammer and if i ever publish will need their approval that said this story will be very slow progression and nbot many will enjoy it this is for the others that want a deeper alternate look at what warhammer can be for the common human and how they could rise above all those that enjoy lots of info dumps and cratiopns will get a kick out of it with all that said lets begin.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- seraki
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
- Views
- 3,053
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Alternative ChannelRoyal Road★★ 2.0This work is... Unsound in construction.
Rambling and run-on sentences in the first chapter alone are rather extreme...
Lack of proper punctuation/capitalization, such as lacking quotation marks, lowercase "I" and missing apostrophes in words such as "I'm".
Wordsmith doesn't seem to have an intuitive grasp of grammar or structure, hopefully they can improve with time and later revise their earlier chapters.
Furthermore, I can't help but feel the chapter length has much to be desired; with the first chapter being a bit short and those after it being nothing more than footnotes in scale.
However, I can at least say the concept of a WH40k is pretty fun/interesting.
I love isekai stories as well as WH40k, so this is right up my alley otherwise.