My not so Peaceful Dungeon Life

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Description

My name is Shiro. Or it was. Now it is Core #293. I'm quite fond of my new name. After dying I became a dungeon core. These humans keep trying to disturb my NEET lifestyle though! I don't care if you want to go on an adventure do it in someone elses house!

Art by AnubisBVS

https://www.deviantart.com/anubisbvs/art/Shiro-798386994

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • magical heartRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    this story is a lot of fun and I find my self enjoying it immensely the characters are fun and the comedy is Phenomenal. I'm really looking forward to where this story is headed and hope everyone can enjoy this story as much as I do.
  • Waffle(est)Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Note: review as of chapter 12 "Shiro the Chick Magnet"
    Starts out a bit dry but gets better a few chapters in once the mc gets to have meaningful interactions with other characters.
    I'm not sure about the road-trip tho. Could be great but risks turning the dungeon core theme into meanlingless flavor text. (a lot of dungeon stories lose the dungeon theme once the mc gets a humanoid avatar, in which case the dungeon is just an awkward detour that is effectively a prolonged hero summoning).
    I hope there will still be room for dungeon shenanigans in the future.
  • AnubisBVSRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    It's good I was wandering if you needed a new photo for your light novel if so i can give you one for free(just because i was bored and was learning how to draw and saw your photo for light novel and wanted to draw it), well hit me up if you want it or not. (also if your feeling generoes check out my light novel)
  • IhateeverythingRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I'm not going to do a long review, because it only has 6 chapters out as I'm writing this.
    Short and sweet, this story has good grammar and tempo, it just needs a lot of fleshing out. It's very light, and you don't feel like you know any of the characters. The goddamn fire snake is more relatable than the MC! (maybe that's exaggerating a bit). It's not interesting, except if you're just looking to pass the time, which any videogame would be just as good as.
    IT NEEDS TO FLESH OUT THE CHARACTERS
  • KiokuRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    By "okay writing" I mean more... the writing is pretty bad, but the style is fun enough to almost make up for it.  The bigger problem the story faces - at least by chapter 3, I honestly couldn't say for further on - is that the main character is just so amazingly dumb.  It's painful to read a story focused on someone with such absymal decision making skills and situational assessment.