My Mind Is Not Yours

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"Nothing can escape these eyes!"Apparition Vision - the power capable of deciphering people's souls. Female sleuth Florian Lilly Cobblestone is meticulously mastering this supernatural power. (Progression detective series.)

Florian sees everyone's unique spirits while hers remains unseen.She seeks help from psychologist Dr. Ronaldo Von Nirvanas. As he studies Florian's abilities, they encounter criminals hiding in Tarot Tori City.

This is the beginning of an eccentric genius detective vs. criminal masterminds series. Prepare for dynamic battles of wits with bizarre elements.

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Book trailer:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0yjBMVDV8IU&t=69s

New chapter every Thursday.These releases will stay on Royal Road, Wattpad, and Scribble Hub.

Hardback and paperback are available now! (Ch. 1-40):Barnes & Noble+ PaperbackAmazon+ HardbackAmazon

Check out the eBook version with illustrations on Google Play Books, Barnes & Noble, and Amazon:Kindle+Google Play+Nook

Get eBooks 1-4 (Ch. 1-40) for free!Use codeBNPTHEWORLDat Barnes & NobleOr for Google Play Books use code: Q77HZE59ATBNP

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Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Eliot D. Esparza

Tags

FANTASYFEMALE LEADSUPERNATURALPSYCHOLOGICALMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSLOW FANTASYMYSTERYSTRATEGYURBAN FANTASYCONTEMPORARYPROGRESSION

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Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
14
Views
10,737

Chapters(40 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Michael BeutlrockRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    If you enjoy a story with a lot of emotional depth I recommend you give this story a try. The author is good at painting a vivid picture of Florians point of view.
    This story begins almost like a childrens story but you can always feel this thread of unease and darkness through out its chapters.
    The contrast of the perfect world we see around our protaganist and the dark under currents is beautiful and sometimes haunting. I would say at some points almost eldritch.
    Even the minor characters around the protagonist immediatley gain depth though the unique perspective she has. The main characters are really fleshed out. The Villians are all representations of classic Archetypes but are shown to be individuals. There are some gripes I have with their casual beahavior that are meant to establish they are villains that feel a little jarring but it does not deract from the story much.
    The Ambiguity of people knowing or not knowing what is going on is creating an amazing tension.
    When this story hits, it hits hard and unrelenting.
    My only critisism is that there isn't more.