My life as a male harpy

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Piconokuwerebaba

• I screwed up, rip
  Jan 3, 2018
• chapter 3 normal
  Dec 22, 2017
• the world and titles
  Dec 17, 2017
• chapter 1 being... special
  Dec 3, 2017
• Prologue hoho! Wings.. Crap
  Dec 3, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• The AbyssRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Honestly, this story is far from what I was expecting. It sounded much like one of those stories you make without much planning, and the title doesn't do it much good either.
  However, this story seems like a rising star in the RRL community. That's why I've decided to give it an advanced review. It's not often that you see something so original and different from common tropes.
  Let's start with the style:
  The style could use improvement, but I won't go too in depth. All I'll say is that it's rather similar to my previous style. If I did try, it most likely would not do any good.
  Next, the grammar score:
  All around, the grammar is good. There aren't many mistakes in the grammer department, and those that are are negligible.
  Story score:
  Seeing how original the story is, this had to have a high score.
  First things first, you don't follow rules set by others. You decided to make a very uncommon character, and have them as a male harpy. Most times, or rather, at all times, Harpies are female. With your story, this will most likely change from now on. The idea is marvelous!
  Then, your god. The god is also very unordinary. I've only ever seen something simlar in a story of my own, and even then it wasn't truly their domain. I can already see the inspiration that this will bring to writers.
  The story doesn't follow many common tropes, either. The only ones I've seen so far are the reincarnation and meeting with a god tropes. You leave us questioning many things, rather than giving us all the answers right off the bat.
  Lastly, the character score:
  In my opinion, your characters are worth five stars. I stated this earlier, but the originality is prevalent. There isn't much else to say.
  Overall, I can't think of this story as anything other than a masterpiece. There isn't much left to improve and, as with all good stories, it left me in anticipation for what will happen next.
• RznRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  The premise of reincarnated as a male harpy is a bit of a unique one for sure. There are a few immature jokes and some general framing before the focus becomes the titles, evolution and the story skips all the development in favor of a complex setting without grounding. The author has declared it as dropped, but it was not particularly bad - rough in prose and while trending to immature jokes and expressions, it was a solid start that just was too quickly developed.