My Life As A Fire Hero!

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Description

Hayato is an ordinary schoolboy.....Until he and his friends got summoned to another world! They now act as the guardians of that world and they must take down the 10 leaders of evil!

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Zaid Asim

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 15
Views: 7,267

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Blue HandsRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
As of chapter 9. The author is clearly setting up some plot points and foreshadowing for future chapters. Some chapters seem rushed as if the author was trying to get to the "good" parts of the plot. His grammar is not that good. Sentence structure is almost always off point. I would like to give this novel a chance to improve. The author stated that the first chapters would be rewritten after volume 1 ends. However, I would like to address the fact of the author's lack of organization of ideas skill. Chapter 9 seems to be written in a different style than the previous cjapter which is why I am giving this novel a chance to improve.
InbetweenactionRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
gramar is bad, and the style is hard to follow. the author clearly has an idea of what he wants to tell, and the storyy and what is happening is so clear in his head, that he forgets to put anything of it down on the paper.
redo it, and it might become a proper story. you clearly have the story in your mind, it just needs work. allot of work