My Infinite Mana System

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Description

For centuries, humanity has cowered beneath the shadow of portals, gateways to domains teeming with monstrous beasts and capricious gods.

Humanity survives by one creed: Hunt or be Hunted

To fight against the them, humans known as Hunters awakens with extraordinary abilities, allowing them enter portals, to slay, clear, and grow stronger.

While others manifested their powers in youth, he shattered the rules.

He awakened at age 20, an impossibly late, but his awakening defied all understanding, it made him a walking cataclysm.

He didn't just gain power, he gained "Infinite Mana".

Awakening with boundless energy, power beyond measure courses through him, and now, wielding the primal force "Lightning", Allen is a force of nature on legs.

But raw power is a double-edged sword.

In a world were to much power is dangerous, nothing will stop Allen's rise to power. After all, being weak would only make you a sitting duck.

------------------What to expect:

Unique Monsters

Antihero lead (The type that doesn't care about people that much, only himself, his goal, his family, and things he wish to care about)

Portals sometimes not only transport to dungeon or towers, it can also transport to other unique/dangerous places.

Broken To Broken+ MC (The type of broken that makes you wonder if this novel can get pass 10 chapters, but it did. So if you aren't a fan of those type of story, don't read it)

Broken Characters (Just as the MC is broken, other characters are too, some even stronger)

Intense, Fast-Paced Action, And Epic Battles

Fast Leveling + Cultivation

Stats + LitRPG System-----------------

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Aisoo_Star

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 113
Views: 80,852

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Community Reviews(5)

CapwallcroftRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
My Infinite Mana is an action-packed, monster-hunting epic that will be sure to please any fans of the genre!!!! CHECK THIS OUT NOW!!! Especially if you want a great read, awesome battle scenes and a solo-leveling style rise!!!!
Spoilers Below:
The novel takes place centred around our main character Allen Quovar, a 20-year-old who mysteriously awakens with magic powers during his 9-5 job (coffe-po-kun strikes again) and finds himself with the miraculous ability to do lightning!!! He joined the hunters association, a society created to fight monsters and raid dungeons and then from there on, it's ambition, struggle and a hero's journey!! The novel is great!!!! The author has mastered the art of describing combat scenes in a poetic manner, not often relying on verbose descriptors or chalky metaphors, but through an interesting style of epic lines and vivid imagery, theres a scene where Allen is fightning a minotaur and he literally just says he knows his magic wont work but he'll just fight it harder (in more poetic manner LOL) and that's the kind of action packed descriptors we have, like it's just great! While what I am reading now is still for the majority the same dungeon, with combat scenes, we are introduced to some great supporting characters, Tobias (leader), Evelyn (healer), Lilly (ranger), Marcus (trap expert), who really bring out team spirit and the party aspect of dungeon fighting to life. I guess Allen is DPS LOL. While they all are a little generic, they do feel fleshed out and have unique personalities, dialogue and reasonable quips, which makes it all more dramatic for what happens later.......anyway the author does an amazing job at writing dialogue, descriptions and making the characters feel alive. LIKE amazing, the dialogue really is simple, but it's believable and does a fantastic job of painting the fights and bringing everything to life.
The author essentially is a true and tested professional when it comes to pacing, and combat descriptors, we
Idiot MuffinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The novel's story is pretty self evident from the synopsis. The author does not try to hide the fact that it's a solo-leveling type story, as most of the world building and plot devices and even terms come from solo-leveling. That said, it's a very refreshing take on this concept and shows a lightning based power that can erase anything on touching, which is honestly quite cool XD
I would love to see how it progresses and how his powers evolve into something even more awesome :)
The character development is decent with Allen starting off as a nobody who awakens, and then joins a team and startst he life of a hunter XD
His past, emotions, and psyche are explored in depth.
The side characters are interesting, my personal favourite was Marcus XD He was funny and tried to present his failure as victories haha, he gave a very human touch to the story.
The team dynamics are cool, with the individual members each specializing in certain powers, and the MC being the newbie among them :)
That said, the story definitely is an early draft, and needs to be fleshed out. Some of the world building, sensory details, and background information has to be layered, and some gramatical issues have to be fixed. But, those are really minor, and the story more than enough compensates for it.
The best part of the novel was how easy it was to read the prose of the novel XD You can easily speed-read through the prose without any loss of clarity, and the cinematic experience is quite simplistically presented. The author is definitely talented in writing. Looking forward to reading more of the chapters :)
NeemsayRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
General Overview:
This story pulls you in with a mix of excitement, personal growth, and a dash of mystery as Allen Carter steps into the world of the Awakened. From his cautious first steps to the sparks of his lightning power, you really feel like you're right there with him. The Hunter’s Association, with its grand setting and no-nonsense characters, adds a great backdrop for Allen’s transformation. The pacing is steady, with enough tension to keep you hooked without feeling rushed. It’s a promising start that leaves you wanting more.
Storyline:
Allen’s journey from a late bloomer to a fully registered Hunter is simple but satisfying. The combat test really shines, giving us a glimpse of his raw talent and the challenges he’ll face. There’s a nice balance between action and quiet moments, like when he stares at his Hunter’s card, realizing his life has changed forever. It feels like the start of something much bigger, setting up questions about where his powers and path might lead him. Overall, it’s a solid and engaging introduction.
Style:
The writing is sharp and descriptive, with a knack for bringing places and moments to life—like the shimmering walls of the combat room or the tension before the assessment. Dialogue fits the characters and keeps things moving without bogging down in unnecessary detail. The mix of introspection and action is well-balanced, giving readers time to connect with Allen while staying in the moment. There are a few spots where the descriptions could be pared down for even more impact, but nothing feels out of place. It’s immersive and easy to read, which is perfect for this kind of story.
Character Development:
Allen’s growth is subtle but compelling. You can feel his nervousness and excitement as he transitions from being an outsider to claiming his place among the Awakened. He doesn’t just survive the combat test—he thrives in it, showing hints of confidence and capability that promise he’s just getting started. His awe at the Asso
P_MagnoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Story:
The narrative unfolds in a captivating manner, combining elements of urban fantasy with a deeply personal journey. The protagonist, Allen Carter, experiences a transformative awakening that propels him into a world of power and potential. The storyline effectively interweaves themes of loss, redemption, and the struggle for self-identity, as Allen grapples with his past and the newfound abilities that could redefine his life. The pacing is well-crafted, transitioning smoothly from introspective moments to action-packed sequences, keeping the reader engaged throughout.
Grammar:
The story is well-written, exhibiting a strong command of grammar and syntax. Sentence structures vary effectively, with varying lengths that enhance the rhythm of the prose. Descriptive language immerses the reader in the setting, while dialogue flows naturally, contributing to the character development. The use of punctuation is generally precise, guiding the reader through the emotional beats of the narrative.
Style:
The author’s style is vivid and engaging, employing rich imagery and sensory details that bring the world to life. The descriptive passages effectively convey the protagonist's emotions and the weight of his memories, allowing readers to connect with Allen on a personal level. The balance between internal monologue and external action is well-maintained, providing insight into Allen's character without overwhelming the plot. The tone shifts appropriately between moments of tension and reflection, enhancing the emotional impact of the story.
Character:
Allen Carter is a compelling protagonist whose journey from mediocrity to empowerment is both relatable and inspiring. His internal struggles with guilt and the desire to honor his parents' memory add depth to his character. The supporting cast are well-developed, bringing unique skills and personalities that complement the story. The characters' interactions are authentic and contribute to the story's overall richness.
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NaumFaruqRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
An edge fest. Mc reads like he is an asshole for the sake of being an asshole, author likes to throw around terms like absolute this and absolute that then a couple sentences later "but not really", fight scenes are mc going muh power!. It's a power fantasy where the author tries to make out the mc as some Byronic hero but only shows an edgy kid.