My Goddess Mother Gave Me A SYSTEM AND KICKED ME OUT

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Description

A disembodied soul wakes in a void with no memory of who they used to be but still has a general knowledge of how they had lived on Earth.

The soul is approached by a primordial goddess of chaos and is asked by the goddess whether they wish to join her family. Once they became kin with the goddess they were told to travel throughout multiple worlds and get stronger.

Follow the story of Zero as he travels through familiar and unfamiliar worlds to gain strength.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Nii07

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.1/ 5.0
Followers: 408
Views: 666,120

Chapters(311 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

North87Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I find the story unique and fun compared to other stories. I find the setting of the story to fun and different than the normal stories that I read. This is a new story that should get more attention. Keep up the great work because this is a fun story to read.
Fluffy_Black_AshesRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I like the novel so far but I noticed that at chapter 21 the spelling takes a hit. An editor needs to take a pass through the chapters from here to proofread. I don't mind having to mentally correct one or two words per chapter but 10-15 per chapter makes it less worth the effort to understand.
deus vultRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
wish fullfillment author self inserts himself in the world of his favourite stories and video games and such. anyways, kid goes to dracula world and copies his powers, then goes on to ascend to become something like a god or something. the magic doesn't make much sense anymore, and everything is ridiculous on several levels, in terms of physics basically magic overrides it, and he eventually can do whatever magic and skills he wants as long as he eats enough souls. he can also create souls and stuff so he has overpowered people everywhere calling him master.... calling mc powerful is not enough to describe mc. it's more like mc starts treating reality like a toy, and enjoys breaking it on several levels. like a child who was given a screw driver and a copy machine from his mother, so he breaks everything apart and makes ridiculous things. except that he has no idea the consequences of breaking things apart, or even how anything works even after doing that, just that it looks cool, and he basically relies and the copy machine to make it all functional. things from mythology and magic only make sense because mc wants them to make sense. skills are accumilated really quickly and there is no rule to them. every world that exist in fiction exist in mc's multiverse. which means they are both real and not real at the same time, depending on which part of the multiverse you're walking on. more like dreamscape but with chaos ruling over everything. that's a quaint way to describe reality.
the skills have nothing to do with anything anymore. everything becomes just a battle of wills at that point. like the mental fight they have towards the end, where they rely on their imagination to do anything and that's inside someone's mind. time magic? mc unlocks that by chapter 30. soul magic? sorry, already mastered. the divine tree iggdrasil is copied to become his daugther or something in a gacha like game mechanic where he just merges a bunch of souls together. yeah. but it's fine.
goatheliXRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Review Chapter 169
To put it simply this novel is like junk food; its bad and quick but you still come back for more. It becomes a power fantasy after a little while with skills becoming damn near useless making every fight into a dbz slog of will.
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Edit as of Chapter 201
I still stand by my earlier statement that this is a power fantasy that turns into dbz slogs at time. But after taking a step back for a bit I have more to add. First is my love for the world building and the power system; plainly put it is well built. The story however is slow as sin with it still feeling like we are in the prologue which should be changing soon with the world hop coming up. Their needs to be a grammar checker at some point at minimum due to the constant problems with it. The characters are solid except for the protag which has admittedly gotten mildly better. In my personal veiw the protag needs humanity, experience, a mentor that actualy has something akin to his powers, and to cool it with the pride as he in the grand scheme of things isn't all that great. I don't expect this to happen instantly but I do hope it happens.
btw the discord link doesn't work
micahl3030Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
so for me the first 40 chapters were great then they added it where the mc had a child? which completly destroyed the story and if i was the author i would have scrapped that idea right away. it destroyed the entire story and just made it a mess. i just dont know
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RaggnorossRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
For the first 30 or so chapters I enjoyed it but soon after it started to show sings of the whole wish fulfillment thing. Gaining skills based around sex/sexuality/lust then he grabs some fairly random charater barely mentioned and turns her into a qarinah, think succubus but different I gues. then the sex scene on chapter 44, its not even a good one though even if it was I wouldn't give this a higher rating.
Personally? Not my thing, but considering the amount of these types of books on RR it may be yours.