My Girlfriend: Death

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

Kniever

• Update #2
  Aug 11, 2016
• Update
  Jun 7, 2016
• Chapter 8- The deepest depths of one’s mind.
  May 21, 2016
• Chapter 7- The unfortunate adventure of a succubus
  May 18, 2016
• Chapter 6- A new challenger approaches
  May 11, 2016
• Chapter 5- A bit of payback
  May 7, 2016
• Chapter 4- The mysterious transfer student.
  May 4, 2016
• Chapter 3- Aftermath.
  Apr 30, 2016
• Chapter 2- Miko vs Death
  Apr 26, 2016
• Chapter 1- The (mis)adventure of the Childhood friend!
  Apr 25, 2016
• What can I do next? Continue or drop?
  Apr 24, 2016
• Prologue- If she catches you, she’s going to kill you!
  Apr 23, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• LightmakerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I really enjoyed reading through this story.  I was fascinated the moment I saw the title and only came to enjoy it even more than I expected.  I hope you choose to continue it.
• osiccorRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I like the idea and the story is well written
• CypherRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Good grammar. Check
  Nice storyline. check
  Steady pacing. Check
  Yandere GF that is the incarnation of death. Check
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  This people, is why I hang out here on RRL.
  The plot is unique, there aren't many noticable mistakes on grammar and the character development is good.
  Most importantly, I've finally found a school life/slice of life story with a Yandere heroine. Great job!!!
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  Cypher out...
• MyriddinRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I've been looking for something which mixes horrow and romance lately (why are you looking at me like that..) and this fills in that spot!
  I've only read the prologue so far, so i'm not going to give 5 stars yet, but it shows promis i for one definitly want to see where it goes from here.
• EliTheGamerRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  *sniff* I can smell potential here.
  Your Style of Writing quite resembles Japanese pop culture but with a hint of foreign elements that makes it bearable to the eyes of the more active readers.
  Story is typical and I know that's the point you're going for but I hope there's more to it than meets the eye, so here's for the first chapter and I'll just leave 3 stars here for now.
  Grammar is excellent with only a few obsolete mistakes.
  And the Characters were sharp, to the point that I couldn't see it progress but still sharp.
• AardvarkyRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Great read, but not the type of light-hearted/w dark theme Yandere I was looking for. It would be more correct to describe this as light-hearted since the darker parts are not handled well.
  The grammar usage makes it easy to read and it flows pretty well between action and dialogue. The story was a solid platform to build on as far as I read and the character are highly developed. I dislike this type of main character sinc everything he thinks or does is kinda boring, but that’s just my opinion.
  I stopped reading it after the poorly handled (possible) rape situation. I know it doesn’t even get close to it, but implying such things demands a mature judgement. I’m not saying you should not add one, but it was handled poorly and it would have been an excessively better experience had it been left it out.
  All said and done (biased opinions aside) , if you are looking for a light hearted Yandere then look no further because I was really enjoying the main girl. The character have as much depth as other high rank stories. I love the concept of death as the main girl and mikos to add depth into the world. It is always a welcomed sight to see more Yandere girls XD. The review is ends here so stop reading if you don’t wanna read my rants about the rape scenario, which is purely and highly subjective.
• A Simple NecromancerRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Good work. You not only have a good story so far but you set the stage for a harem story if you ever feel the need.