my first story ^U^

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Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

frbdnknwlg1988

• The Last Chapter
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ Chapter 7
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ Chapter 6
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ Chapter 5
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ CHAPTER FOR
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ chappy 3
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ - chapter 2
  Feb 7, 2021
• my first story ^U^ Chapter 1
  Feb 7, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(5)

• Cocop (Cale Plamann)Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I've read five chapters of this book and the room is spinning.  I'm not sure if it's original, translated, satire or genuine.  All I know is that it has made me put my own writing and attempts to convey plot points and emotion into perspective.
  To quote Percy Shelley:
  “Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
  Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
  Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
  And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
  Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
  Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
  The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
  And on the pedestal, these words appear:
  My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
  Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!”
• KrazeKodeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This is perhaps the best-translated novel I have read on Royal Road. The only thing that could make it better? A T/N note explaining O-hi-O, I will settle for a T/N: Keikaku means plans as well.
  I look forward to reading other works and translation of famous works like Ookami to Kyoushinrou (English version)'s translation, or Oregairy (eng) version's Translation, all brilliant works.
  All in all, worthy of 5/5
• Skylark (Dion Sky)Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A doomed translation of a text once lost to the failing geriatric bowels of the internet, my first story ^U^ appears to be the first and final voyage of a sinking ship. But much like the aforementioned Titanic, this author's maiden voyage has a powerful and chequered history of infamy. What at first appears to be jumbled, meandering prose, shallow characterisation and critical misunderstandings about economics in reality hides a complex metaphorical narrative packed with rich symbolism weaving in and out of the interwoven threads of the story and beyond, eventually escaping off the page and into the author's bizarre and tumultuous descent into real-life degeneracy.
  The text demands to be read as an intersectional commentary on cultural anthropology. my first story is a modern-day Ulysses, an avant-garde work of genius decades ahead of its time, blending the cultural ethos of the internet age with references of works of classic literature and pop culture alike with bold and powerful genre-breaking leaps. Intrepid and adventurous, the original text blazes its fearless trail into deep philosophical political and religious statements of the modern zeitgeist, molded like permanently-refrigerated butter from the contemporary discourse of the historical era, and framed in the kind of satirical verse essayists can spend entire volumes of work debating for generations to come. Truly one of the great classics of our age.
  Not for the faint of heart, the translation notes nevertheless provide some helpful insight into deciphering references and timestamps for the unenlightened reader. Although be advised - some work will still be required to fully make sense of its complex themes and interlocking connections. The prose is rife with isms; each character an individual representation of a different aspect of the author's warring internal struggles. We are never quite sure if we are ceasing the seizing of the means of production, for instance, or simply seizuring. But we feel the a
• Traitorman (JM Clarke)Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Well, this is a first for my reading on Royal Road: a translated story.
  I gotta say, it's pretty good if unexpected. The story is about the main character, anime Ayn Rand in her noble quest to defeat furries and communism. The TL notes really add a lot of insight to this piece. So let's dive in, shall we?
  Style
  The style is the best on royal road. Bar none. It really helps with the immersion. Meta-immersion if you will. The style not only brings you into the story, but really mimics the experience of reading the story in its original form.
  I honestly felt like I was back in 2006, reading an original fiction on a message board in a dully lit basement while receiving yaoi paddle jpgs on my dell laptop. Great stuff. Kudos to the translator for this.
  Grammar
  The grammer is impeccable. Remember, this is a translated story and the translator has done an excellent job translating the grammar structures of the story's original language: English.
  Story
  Eat your heart out, Tolkien, this truly is a story that shines thanks to the translator's modifications to the original prose. Top score!
  Character
  The characters are translated beautifully, all their original cultural idyosyncrassies  are on display here, and perfectly translated from English to English.
  Conclusion
  This is one of the most skilled translations I have ever read. I can't wait to see if the translator tackles other stories from this language, like Chronicles of Narnia or the Bible.
  Excellent job.
  ...
  Oh right, and as for the original story itself?
  Not good.
  .5/5
  EDIT: I changed my mind, it's great. 5/5
• Vowron PrimeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
  I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
  She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
  In the shape of an "L" on her forehead
  Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
  Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
  Didn't make sense not to live for fun
  Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
  So much to do, so much to see
  So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
  You'll never know if you don't go
  You'll never shine if you don't glow
  Hey, now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
  Hey, now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
  And all that glitters is gold
  Only shooting stars break the mold
  It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
  You're bundled up now wait 'til you get older
  But the meteor men beg to differ
  Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
  The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
  The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
  My world's on fire. How about yours?
  That's the way I like it and I'll never get bored
  Hey, now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
  Hey, now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
  And all that glitters is gold
  Only shooting stars break the mold
  Go for the moon
  Go for the moon
  Go for the moon
  Go for the moon
  Hey, now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
  Hey, now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
  And all that glitters is gold
  Only shooting stars
  Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas
  I need to get myself away from this place
  I said yep, what a concept
  I could use a little fuel myself
  And we could all use a little change
  Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
  Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
  Didn't make sense not to live for fun
  Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
  So much to do, so much to see
  So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
  You'll never know if you don't go
  You'll never shine if you don't glow
  Hey, now, you're an all star