My Farm Within

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Status

Hiatus

Author

evolyrolf

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• solgardRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Thank you for writing this book. It is very good. I like it. Thank you. The release schedule was awesome releasing 50 chapters in a week up till now. Hope you can keep this going.
• Dan NgoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Read the first 10 chapters, good flow, engaging, not too much and not too little, I like it 👍🏿
• forgottenslayerRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Generally, this story is a reincarnation wish-fulfillment type with am overpowered charter that, in this case, morphs into a semi-divine being. you have a charter that finishes an achievement in his previous life that set him up big for his new life.
  Style -It gets 1.5 stars due to the total lack of consistent formatting. It is not the dreaded wall of text and has spacing but the writing expects things like tables where none exist just a whole bunch of bullet points that change with more or less information as the story progresses.
  Story - It gets 3  stars as it is an interesting concept where they take a farm simulator/ dungeon creator which is where it gets most of its points the downside is that there is no known goal at the 200-page mark. we have a general that he wanted a better life for his "new/old/ combo of the two" family though it gets dropped in favor of becoming a major business, but it is managed by others so not much there. also, the age constraint on the main charter seems to get forgotten and even ignored. it wouldn't take much but some details here and there to get it on track but at this moment it is missing.
  Character - It gets 1.5 stars as most of the charters seemed forced and rather flat. the MC is a typical OP MC that is arbitrarily messing around with no regards for the consequences and others just go with it.  The MC's parents are rather oblivious to the relationship developing with his teacher... (note this might be a cultural difference between the US and Philippines, where I guess the Auther resides, in relationship with teachers). The main love interest just goes along with the MC's advances despite the age difference and the student-teacher relationship but see the note above.
  Grammer - It gets 1 star as the grammar leaves much to be desired. There are several places where I understand what the author was trying to say but what was there has a very different meaning.  Punctuation is also decidedly lacking.
  Overall My Farm Within gets 2.
• whoeverRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Consists almost entirely of direct speach: check
  Hardly any paragraph having more than one sentence: check
  One-dimensional characters (if any characters at all): check
  Contains displays ("blue boxes") without any formatting: check
  No mechanics not seen hundreds of times before: check
  At least the grammar is not too bad (at least for the low RRL standards).
  It might get better later on, but I could not stand more than the first dozen chapters.
  If you are into this kind of work, you might be able to enjoy it. Otherwise, don't waste your time on it.
• GiantSlugRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  Shottacon, 18 year old very beautifull college graduate kissing with a child, no goal, it is just stupid !!!
• anameRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Why the author would try write in a romance between a 13 year old and an 18 year old is beyond me... Cringiest sh*t I've read in a while.
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  It only gets worse later on...