My Daughter's Crown [Complete]

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Description

She can hardly control the emergence of her dark side.

The uncontrollable princess who should have never existed.

When sent to a temple for her impropriety, she secretly runs off, seeking revenge on those who have wronged her mother.

Travelling across the large expanse of land.

Venturing through the depths of the empires.

Her only goal?

To put an end to her dear grandfather's life.

Warning, it will contain the following content:Action, romance, mystery, horror, cannibalism, thriller, comedy, and mature content such as sex, rape, murder, incest, child violence, bestiality, and slavery.

If you are not comfortable with any of the above topics, please proceed with caution, or move along.

Cover art by: the_nerd.artist

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.4/ 5.0
Followers
55
Views
49,985

Chapters(53 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • trollord3000Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hey...I'm not really used to writing reviews but I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying the novel so far. I'm at chapter 10 at the moment and find that the characters have this realistic weight to them which I find great. I am really looking forward to see how the story will continue.
  • thernnRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Overall well writen except for a few points. The most jarring of these is when the author implements a plot device (PD) seemingly out of left field. This PD leaves the reader reeling as the ease with which the MC accepts the device it is completely out of character for the headstrong and willful MC that refuses to be tied down which the author has built up. Instead, the MC is portrayed as a meek, submissive person who accepts that which is pushed onto her. The Crown Prince and Emperor can't force her to bend to their will, but some old auntie she has known less than a day can push stuff onto her. Additionally, the MC seemingly accepts this PD without any consideration for how it may affect their quest.
    Now, in hindsight I can understand the MC's thought process as to why she accepts this and I can sympathize with her. However, the author implements this PD poorly. The reader should be allowed a glimpse into the thought process of the MC when she undertakes this decision and WHY she does it.  The reason given is good, however the reader should not be clued in ~8 chapters down the line. Otherwise the reader is left to wonder if the MC has abandoned her quest and whether they should expect similar, hamfisted plot twists from the author in the future.