My Annoying Aura Follows Me Into Another World

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This is a tale of 4 heroes inadvertently summoned into the world of ""Quadra"" where the ""Gods of the Four Continents"" are waging war against each other for the empty throne of the ""One True God"". Caught up in this battle royale is our unlucky and naive protagonist, Suzuya Junichiro, an average high school student with a strange power. How will he live in the new world whilst preparing for the coming disaster? Well, soon we shall find out..Disclaimer: I do not own neither the cover picture of this fiction or any images in it. It is purely for a better reading experience. Thank you.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Slashcrit

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 789
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Community Reviews(10)

grimpotatoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
All of it is great, the main character is funny wity and breaks the 4rt wall. The writing is good and the grammar is exellente, the story is promising, the writing style is good and the characters are at least decent up to this point ut you didn't have enought time to develope them but as long as you remember to do it it'll be fine.
Thks for the read?
Prinzez22Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
An overall great story with a lot of plot potential with multiple overpowered entities and mc's. So excited for the time when their various paths cross. Keep up the good work.
ShiguneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A great read that's certainly worth your time.I love all the aspects of the novel. Probably due i read lots of japanese novels. This novel kinda gives me the same fibes of the novels from japan.
Keep up the good work and i hope to see more of your novel!
GurmanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Interesting story about incarnation in anther world. It is writed in japanese light novels style, which I like.
ILoveAnimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like how storytelling is lighthearted and easy to read. Also Text is spaced perfectly for reading. Op characters are always good and although story is bit lighthearted there is still substance to it.
Mr.WhiteCalciumRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Stop with the phonetic Japanese references it makes this story seem too weeabooish.Everything else is fine Keep up the Good work
TorroLocoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I liked the story it had good grammar and it was easy to read. I found it confusing at times when you switched between the pov’s of the various chosen. But for the rest it is a nice story little flaws very enjoyable in my opinion there could have been a better learning curve or maybe like chapters between the various stages of the training so that you would have gotten more of a progressive feeling.
AnarchyDevRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is written with a very consistent pace in terms of the overall story and characters development.
Style:
Easy to read and every chapter is satisfying with a long chapter length and a very casual pace of story development.
Although, the story is fully in terms of MC POV and hence we don’t get more time to see any of the other characters, but the Author has added side chapters to get the other main characters POV(Yup, main as in 4 different heroes; read the story). Also, since is the main focus is the MC we get a very consistent view of things around him and not enough world development. Finally, because of the casual pace of chapters, the story development is a bit slow.
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Story:
The main plot is set on a grand scale in the 1st chapter itself, but later on due to the story pace, all development takes place in the background without the MC involving himself and only starts at Chapter-29. For those who like anime-style stories will really like this (or not).
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Grammer:
Nothing to complain. Easy formatting and casual English.
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Character:
This is something that needs to be worked on if ever rewritten. All the characters are set to extreme mode; MC and others need to be balanced out properly in terms of power or personality.
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Great Casual read with frequent release of long chapters.
TheGrayZRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I can't really rate this one too highly. Do not get me wrong, I enjoy the story, I do. he way it is written is slowly getting on my nerves is all.
Style: My biggest complaint. I was fine with it at first, but why must you make every sentence a new paragraph? I get that you've been influenced by Japanese LN's, bu this is rediculous. And you don't even end them with periods, you use eipses (...) essentially. It makes the tone of the story very lethargic and uninterested.
Story: Doesn't seem to be going anywhere right now. You had some build up, which was immediately solved, and now something else is going on. You do not seem to have much in the way of direction right now, at least to me.
Grammar: The best aspect of your story as is. The sentences/paragraphs are easy to read and I don't need to go out of my way to understand what is being said. Very few spelling mistakes as well, kudos.
Character: No development, enough said. Your MC hasn't adjusted to his situation yet since the start of the story, and is taking everything in stride. Sure, you had some moments with his teacher and the kids he has rescued, but that isn't really development. There is also a sever lack of supporting cast that plays any role at all. I'm fine with centralized PoVs, but this is rediculous.
YeavonRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The story was perfect until the author decided to do something which I personally hated [quite a few others did too if you read comments] which is kill/insinuate that he[referencing the author] killed the kids and the town, also the whole split personality was a huge turn off when it comes to reading the story he built up such a nice scene of him and the kids and then nope nope nope….
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3 and a half star for style | cause I did enjoy how it flowed till said incident
half a star for story | would give negative if i could due to said incident
3 and a half star for grammar | notbad.jpg
half a star for character | would give negative if i could never liked split personalities and how the author came out about his and how it is in general is a massive turn off when it comes to wanting to read it
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chapter 28 is half a star have not read past this nor will I at this time if ever.
from chapter 1-27 I would give it a 5 star on those that i have a half star to now.
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chapter 28 ruined everything for me made me even regret reading this novel I honestly wouldn’t read this again until there is a re-write of chapter 28 onwards. Mostly due to how it was all handled, I have read and enjoyed other fictions that had split personalities as well as seemingly tragedy to real tragedy however how you pictated it made me a bit….. unwilling to continue. i think it could of been handled differently, the alter ego pretty much acts like he cares nothing about what his other half has managed to do as well as cares nothing about what he wanted to protect like the little ones or the city he just automatically is all happy go lucky like its the start of a fresh novel with all sunshine and rainbows….
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Sorry if this seems harsh but this is my unfiltered and honest opinion of your fiction/novel I understand there isn’t as much constructiveness in said criticism however it’s just as beneficial to note where some people found fault or started to dislike it and why as to better sculpt the story as a