Murkiness Styled Dread

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Status

Hiatus

Author

jewel-degradation

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Mr.KozeRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I'm not sure I have much to say yet, I think this first chapter sets the tone for the next coming events pretty well. I was hoping for maybe a little more dialogue between the three main characters, though I don't think any of the dialogue was bad, I just wish we were given just a slightly bit more of an understanding of at least one of our characters outside of just their appearance for the most part of this chapter.
  Kaela seems to have the most intrigue for me as a character right now and seems to have the most identity and I'm sure it'll expand with the other characters as well, which leads me to my last point.
  This is only the first chapter and my perspective on this story can completely flip over its head just from the next chapter, so I'll hold off on making any bizarre assumptions about your story and let you keep uploading chapters and building the plot. So far, it's starting well and everything seems interesting. I'll be looking forward to seeing how this survival story holds up in the future.
  This will likely not be my last review ;)