Munivit Anima

Self-Published

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Description

The first nuclear war which damaged the earth and the destruction of the planet is already inevitable. Despite the drop of population from 7 billion to 2 billion, countries still continued to fight for little whats left on Earth. A lieutenant in the army decided to hack all the nuclear facilities and activated the self-destruct code. He was caught and killed right after he activated the code.While his soul is wandering in the dimension of life and death his soul was summoned by the Demon King from the world. the reason he was summoned was to save the Demon Race from total extinction because the humans had invaded their continent. They were overwhelmed despite their advantage of higher magic because the Dragons are on the side of the humans. Now that the Demon race is nearly extinct, it is up to the summoned being to save them. but something unexpected happened.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: hayon

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 307
Views: 113,056

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Community Reviews(3)

DragonFuryRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Great characters except that scumbag of an emperor but hey he's supposed to be like that right?
vladislavRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
So yeah... he's like "people wage nuclear wars for nothing, so let's launch ALL nuclear bombs and then people UNDERSTAND that you don't fuke with the atom" then he blow every single nuclear bomb and fell no remorse
maybe he kill all humanity? maybe people were already stopping? maybe you don't press the button that will blow every nuclear bomb in existence? Well mc just don't give a sheet about these things, or does he?
I think that after incident with [Cobalt Bomb] something in his head goes wrong, like he build the imeginary wall that separate his guilt from his conscience, i hope to see how that wall will break
So yeah to review.
we got crazy mc, we got crazy father, and crazy sister too, and i think that his mom is drug addict
it's actualy funny to fantonize about your story but i'd like to say falls
1. characters. Improve it, now! DON'make bad guys vs good guys story. Why imperor so evil, why his sister yandere, why mc helping out beast pristess,why i want chocolate, why all humans approve impire, you need more deep. world isn't blak/white
2. internal conflict of mc, he need to break the wall in his head. mc anihilate humanity( all the nuclear bombs at the same time, and they were 100 times stronger than normal ones cmon nobody will live another day on that planet)
3.i don't like op mc, he need to oversmart his enemis don't just go to noble and "HI I'M 7 and you going to die"
4. HAREM is kiling story. Say no to harem today and tomorow you will not find heads,of femails that you sleep with, in your bed and cute-litle-yandere-sister with blood on her face (HAREM kiling not only the story lol)
5.chapter 14. i don't like the way you going. *SPOILER* Fusing souls with the mad dragon is no good
please don't go that way, you are limiting the posobilities that story might go with to "emperor is a dick,
my siblings that on the side of emperor is a dicks, dragons is the big dicks and now i'm going to masturbate"
6. dialogue and monologue. improve it too. in monologue d
NegosyoRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
So a reincarnated Paladin, Yandere magician, and scumbag Emperor walk into a bar. Who walks out? I don't know but that's what this story seems to be trying to figure out.
Very tropish characters and MC, somewhat jaded plot ( i.e. be reincarnated, become the hero, get a harem, save the world sort of thing ), and poorly initiated plot. Also this story's dialogue tends to be a "he said, she said" sort of thing, which gets boring fast. This is a case where " less is more " in regards to dialogue.
This story has potential as all stories do, but the plot needs to be focused, rethought out in regards to dialogue, and requires more exposition as to the how the environment and the world is described ( and no, it does not mean an info dump every time something new is introduced) for it to go from ok to good to great.