Multiversal Vanguard Into The Dark

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Description

Expect well written power systems, intrigue, world building and fiction with little comparison with others. Hope to see you in the latest chapters!

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“Time is the fifth dimension, I tell you. Length, height, width, spirituality then time.

I know it’s hard to believe but we didn’t believe in the Nexus at first either but it’s not that big of a leap in logic now, is it?”

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As billions of humans slept on **/**/2030, our dormant spiritual power finally reached the tipping point and established connection with the Nexus. A separate galaxy and the gathering point of countless dimensions similar or alien to ours. It just so happens that we are beneath underdeveloped spiritually and equate to a tribe to them.

I who was fated to die a quiet and quaint 60 year life, choose to resist. Not for humanity’s salvation but for my own pride. I’ll face the terrors and become the Multiversal Vanguard Into The Dark.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Fountain_Insight

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSCI-FISUPERNATURALMALE LEADKINGDOM BUILDINGWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKVILLAINOUS LEADGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDSTRATEGYURBAN FANTASYSPACE OPERAPROGRESSIONARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCETECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEEREDFIRST CONTACT

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
14
Views
18,719

Chapters(55 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • NatarajaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    - Style & Grammar
    I didn't see any grammar or syntax issues. The layout is good which makes the text pleasant to read. However, there is a big lack of description. Whether it is the characters, the environment or the action. It is very difficult to find one's way around and therefore to get into the story. The author should pay special attention to this point! The system, or voice in his head, could be highlighted with italics for example. The first names of the characters should be used more often to remind the reader who the reader is following, especially at the beginning of the chapters with a new POV. In the dialogues it is not always clear who is speaking. English is not my native language, so I may have missed some things...
    - Story
    The MC has a dream where he has to pass a test to access the Nexus. It is difficult to follow the story because of a lack of information and description. For the same reason it is difficult to evaluate this point because of the lack of global vision of the universe and the plot. I put 4 stars by default.
    - Character
    There is no physical description of the MC, we don't know either his emotions, his past, or his goals in life... we have to develop these aspects to make him likable and allow the reader to identify with him.
  • woseRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I want to begin with the disclaimer that while I am not a fan of LitRPGs, I always review them based on merit. And this series has a lot of spunk and energy and the author is obviously enjoying writing this...
    ...but the story needs more time to develop. This is evident from the ocassional awkward transitions, the unexpected infodumps or the inexplicable grammatical errors that are obviously a result of high speed pumping out of content.
    I would recommend the author to slow down and give a little time for his stories to develop, nurture the world a bit longer. I will be back to elaborate with an advanced review in a few months and I am sure it will be a much more enjoyable read.