Multiversal Primal Zerg (Semi-SI)

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Description

A predatory creature gains the ability to travel between dimensions after consuming a human implanted with unknown technology. Along with this power, it inherits fragments of human memories, and unexpectedly, something else begins to develop:A conscience.He gains adaptations by consuming the essence of living things, with a limited number of slots for different tiers of adaptations (Minor/Medium/Major). Adaptations can be combined in the future to free up slots.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Evoxius

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Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 83
Views: 13,071

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Community Reviews(3)

ArgakRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Another great story from Evoxius. Their Harry Potter and spider stories are very good. Even though I love their Harry Potter story I would have to say this one is my favorite. I like the adaptations, all the visited settings are great so far and the character is interesting. I find myself extremely excited for the next chapter! Thank you for the great stories!
CrispiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
An amazing start to an interesting take on the monster evolution genre.
Very well written and we have already seen some great character development of the MC (or is it MM?)
He already lucked into some pretty OP gear quite early, so I'm curious how the power scaling is going to work out.
Overall great story so far, can definitely recommend it.
TheNormanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Overall, I have enjoyed the story, but a few things just feel off to me.
The one I can put my finger on is that, as far as I understand it, Essense in the SC universe is more like DNA by another name (because it's just the Zerg that calls it that). In this story, it appears to be more like psychic energy or something intrinsic to whatever is being eaten to the point that he needed more than a single Minecraft stack of dragon heads (aka, more than 64 of them) to get all the 'essense' from it. I could easily understand him needing the biomass, but all the actual essence that he needed shoulda been unlocked in the first one, or three at the max if he somehow missed something.
Other than that I cant figure out what exactly feels off, but there is something minor. I say minor because otherwise, I enjoyed what I was reading and was sad that there were no more chapters to read yet.