Mount Bullet - one shot
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A gun, a rifle and a soldier.I held a flask in hand and drank till the last drop.Better now than never.This is a short story in first person perspective.A narrative and re-creative piece based on Thomas Hardy's poem "The man he killed." but the overall setting is not realistically accurate.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- CharLok
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 697
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Pretty straightforward, but it doesn't have a strong feeling in the setting as the author says - and that seriously impacts the piece and its realism. The flow and sentences have some issues, but the characterization is good. Overall not a bad piece, though it doesn't leave a strong impression on the reader. I did like it, but such violence is glossed over in search of a new container. If anything, the numbness vs apathy is probably why.