Mortal Rebuke - Bound By Fire

Marsh had lived in the shadow of his older brother Kyllian his entire life, when sudden events forced him to run away from everything he knew.

Will he rise to the challenges presented or will he succumb, either way it seems like he has received an inhuman gift from his father, one that might help him throughout his adventure.

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