Morph Genome

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Description

A scientist couple go to extremes to protect their child in the face of an apocalyptic event. Will their tears, sweat and blood pay off? Or is it all for nothing?

Falling Star Of Evolution - Rewritten

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Karnage

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 1,448
Views: 93,804

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

TreyonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hhehe, thanks for the rewrite, hopefully you dont drop the story or go missing again. I will update my review later after a good amount of chapters has been written, but so far looking good.
Also you saw the future, at the rate that the whole world is going to hell currently, in the future i wouldnt be surprised if earth is completely destroyed
Seeking PolarisRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
soon it'll have been a year since he added a chapter, and his profile doesn't show any kind of activity either, and as a reader I don't think I myself would be able to just quit reading cold turkey, so I have to assume that either he's dead or his exams went HORRIBLY wrong and he had to re-think his life and drop the whole author thing without so much as an update on why.
unless like me his computer just signed him out of royal road for no reason and he didn't really notice or care enough to log back in while reading for a great deal of time.
but anyways in terms or writing I think it's safe to assume he is effectively dead.
I can't particularly find any evidence of fans still waiting for him but I'm still gonna enjoy what's left of this story, so far it's frackin great.
maybe now I'll have like at least 1 review that doesn't get taken down for some reason or other considering this whole thing is dead? I'm sure it's my fault for not treating a review like some kind of application form for a very luxorious job as that seems to be the standard for my reviews NOT getting erased, but whatever. if I can't express how much I enjoy something or how dissapointed I am by something and help others while I'm at it, then I see no point in reviews in the first place. or maybe I've simply been on the internet so long that I don't notice it if I'm being insulting or somehow breaking a rule somewhere?
and you might be thinking "my god, this mans never stops typing and his breath never runs out!" yeah, I'm real sick of writing a well thought out review with actual thought put into constructive criticism or typing out why a story is so great, so I'm just rambling here because screw the extensive over the top useless restrictions everybody uses that in the end literally accomplishes nothing
(I'm looking at you, websites that require a password with 3 special characters 6 numbers 7 letters 3 upper case letters 2 undercase letters with no repeating numbers letters or characters with no
A Pear With legsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Nothing really much to say about this yet, but it's good so far and I want to help author-san out.
ClausiousRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great Rewrite so far and has kept me hooked and interested for the MCs progression
DanekenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The original was one of the best stories on this site, really excited for what's to come.
MabouRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i just hope you dont chane the mutation/evolution of his, that was a big part of why most came to like the last vesion and of course the pets, the pets are a must to remain ( hopefully)
Marc'dU4deathRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
odd thing about Karanage's story is it takes awhile to build, i remmeber from falling evolution that while it had me intrested early on from how diffrent it seemed it took quite awhile for the build up to pay off so i think its too early to give a real review as its still building but apprently theres been a surge of 2 stars probs from the same person with multiaccounts so take my fivc.
OutrageRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Update: 26.05.2025 Still waiting
Realy liked the original Falling Star Evolution and can say that i like this one too. If the standard of this rewriting is the same as the original i am realy happy. The gramar in some spots is unusual and there are some missing words but i can say that this are only smal mistakes.
Keep up the good work
Joshua TackieRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I'm writing a review based on the growth I've seen from Falling Star to Morph Genome. That being said, I have seen a whole lot of improvement in your writing, description, and diction especially, compared to Falling Star, so that has made this a very pleasurable start. I do have questions about the Primal fluid and nanobots that may very well be plot spoilers, but I feel their nature is far too ambiguous even considering the mutation through magic. Looking back on the eternity pill, which was, in essence, able to assimilate anything and add it to Sol's powerbase, a clearer explanation or even demonstration in the future would be much appreciated, if it doesn't spoil the fic, of course.
BrokenOliveRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I would have liked to wait for a couple more chapters before a review, but to the request of the author, here it is.
Style 4.5/5
I don't have much to say here.
The style is clean, allowing for fairly clean shift in scenes as we see in chapter 10; hence a score of 4.5.
I could give a 5, but some of the scene shifts are a little akward and can be improved.
Story 5/5
So far, the story has been a good, refreshing, and unique read.
The story, in my opinion, progresses nicely with very few things to critique, so far.
I would have liked to see what the matriarchal mother did in more detail when the kid was in a coma state, but that's just me.
If you came from FSoE and expect a carbon copy or very similar story, then don't. This story can be said to be inspired, but can not be said to be the same.
Grammer 3.5/5
The grammer, for the most part, is good, but when there is a mistake, you notice it, sometimes having to restructure it for yourself.
I would suggest to get a PR for that. [Hit me up if you want a PR]
Therfore good, but has noticable mistakes;therefore a 3.5.
Character 5/5
So, for character, I was a little stumped on what to say as we know little so far, but the characters progression so far has been excellent.
In order to critique individual characters so far would require more chapters or a full chapter dedicated to fully establishing a character's role, which I would advise against, as having static characters can work, but will limit you in the future.
Overall Score
For the overall score, I gave a solid 4 as the story is good and has much potential, but is far to early to give much more in my opinion.