More Than A Demon

Self-Published

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Description

Things have not turned out as expected.

Without being given a choice, She has been forced to leave her home for another realm.Her mission... Her yearning is clear, kill the Demon Lord. But will she gain the strength to see it through?

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We all know you´re aLevelingaddict, but you also like badass and a relatively fast pace? (Fast pace compared to other stuff on this site at least)

Well then, have fun!

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Huge thanks to Finnster for the insane Cover Art(Insta + Deviant art:@ amp.illust)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: musicONgaku

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 81
Views: 37,001

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Community Reviews(3)

FinnsterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hey man,
really, really love your work so far! I can't wait to see where Vienessas adventure will take her!
Your writing and story telling is great! Really keeps luring me in haha
And thanks for commissioning me, I had a blast working with you! It's so exciting finally seeing you on here after all this time!
Im so excited how all of this will continue. Keep going <33
Hurrican999Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Disclaimer: I don't rate books on how good they are, but rather on how much I enjoy them.
A bit short for my taste, but that will change when this gets a 2nd book. The plot twists on the last chapter had me create my account for this review. I also like that goblins are mythical creatures, it's an interesting deviation from any other fantasy where goblins are the next step from a slime. There's some spelling mistakes, but not enough be a problem to me.
Keep up the great work, author! I look forward our demon's next adventures.
EiferRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
It's not a bad read. It could use a run through grammarly or similar to iron out some of the errors.
The MC is pretty two dimensional without a lot of character development.
She's seemingly wanting to kill the demon lord, but is too impatient to learn important information whenever it's presented, on top of coming off as a typical "i know best" child. Which i guess makes sense since she is one, but doesn't make the whole thing less grating to read without something to balance it.
The narrator does a lot of 4th wall breaking, which i personally don't like, specially with the way it's used to over explain certain things.
The fight scenes are decent, but not especially attention grabbing.
All in all, this could be a real good book if it went through some editing.