Moonlight Blues
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The music started the day I met her. She was everything I had ever needed: Bright, beautiful, young, talented, genius, and overwhelmingly kind. Somedays, I just could not keep my eyes off of her. The tune I heard in my mind’s ears began; its great orchestration and compositional prowess displayed through the subtlety of genre-shifting.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Mi460
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 225
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5This is short but very emotional. It does have some awkwardness that sorts itself out - particularly towards the end. This is a good, but very sad read. It only takes a minute to go through. I think it could be better if the wording was cleaned up. Some word choices are a bit awkward such as 'tooted' and 'scoffed and coughed'. The descriptive elements of music here doesn't work very well.