Monsters

Self-Published

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Description

KiAera the apocalypse survivor finds herself in a new fluffy form and a world of monsters.

Note: This is where edited drafts and story updates will be uploaded of the Zeldritzon series!

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2023
Author
Zelrift

Tags

LITRPGACTIONADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADSTRONG LEADGAMELITPSYCHOLOGICALPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIMYSTERYREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASYMYTHOSSTRATEGYPROGRESSIONARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCEFIRST CONTACT

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.5/ 5.0
Followers
40
Views
1,707

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • The Reality Next DoorRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Alright, I will have to write this review again since it appears that my previous attempt got deleted, let's see if I can recreate it! I've got to check if my comments saved.
    Firstly, this is a story about a bunny and a deer that go on a quest together, but these are special beings in a very strange world where most of the things want to kill you.
    Style: While there is nothing wrong with the style per se, it was not my style, there were many colors and while they are pretty, it distracted me. The tables looked okay to me.
    Grammar: I noticed a few minor mistakes, but all in all, the story is fun enough that you barely notice it and the few mistakes can be hand waved away.
    Story: I loved the story so far, every time the deer talks, I need to laugh because the only thing that pops into my head is: “Headlights!”
    Characters: The characters are fun and there seems to be good character development. A few things felt forces or out of the box, but I know from experience that these forced and out of the box moments will be critical in later chapters. I am curious to see how these characters continue developing.
    All in all, if you are looking for a great book, and you can ignore the pretty rainbow colors, then this is the place to be.
  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story begins at a point that understanding it is rather difficult, such as what the MC is and what Doervus is this is marked as CH 4-1. So, chapter 4? Throughout the first chapter it goes into some backstory though the identity of our MC is not given until episode 1 meaning that as of the current setup, the story is out of order. Spoilers to hide the text make it difficult for TTS readers as it will skip those by default. The content itself is fairly straightforward though the setting and text is a bit confusing even for the episode 1 and 2 sections. This seems to have been reduced in content at some point? I do not understand, but this is marked as complete.