Mob without system in Naruto world

Self-Published

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Description

HEY, WHERE IS MY CHEAT SYSTEM???WHY AM I SOME NAMELESS MOB????

Can I at least have a Sharingan.......please?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020
Author
CrusadeAgainstFurries

Tags

ACTIONADVENTURECOMEDYDRAMAMARTIAL ARTSSLICE OF LIFESCHOOL LIFEMALE LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
607
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961,572

Chapters(160 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • MrMaleRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Great story
    with a good storyline
    mostly comical but does a decent job making it at least make sense
    very few grammer mistakes during the story
    it has a consistent story with each chapter having a nice length of words
    it also has a great format for which characters is speaking
    the original cast also aren’t too out of character which is nice
    It doesn’t have too many filler episodes but blends it nicely with the main storyline
    the changes to the story begin small but slowly add up
    would recommend reading or listening to the story
  • floug472Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    At first glance this book is your standard crappy naruto fanfic, but given the fact that i read all of it in one go foregoing sleep and food and still, somehow, enjoyed myself.
    It's clear that this story has something quite special about it, and i'd say that thing is pacing, there is no pause what-so-ever in this book, it just keeps going, not one unintersting bit of dialogue, and no superfluous descriptions.
    It's not perfect, there are some entire sections of the story that are frankly just terrible(in particular the bit where the MC spends like a month fighting retard gangs) but even the retarded bits of the story are funny sometimes so you should definetly try to power through them.
    Another thing that separates this from other fanfics is that it stays true to the material, there's no systems, divine gifts or whatnot, the MC is quite strong but he plays by the rules, which i like.
    Overall i'd say give it a try, this is far from a masterwork of litterature but i had a great time reading it, which in the end i think is what really matters. 5/5
    this review needs 200 words so you can ignore this bit, i'm just writting till i hit 200 words which should be verry soon if my calculations are
  • ZonzogRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is not a serious fanfiction. It is a comedy.
    Don't expect it to be serious. Accept it's nature and you will have a good time. It gets a bit more serious when the first ark starts nearing it's end, and overall there is surprising amount of detail and charaters seem alive.
    Grammar is far from perfect and there are numerous typos.
    Real rating is probably about 4/5, but at the moment it is a bit underrated, so i give it 5/5
  • Conan_SlayerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Excellent story with a original idea, Eiji is so funny, Tenten as childhood friend yandere is so hilarius, i like it!!! Continueeeeee!!!!!!! The Arc with The snake summoning is suprising and fun!! The situation with the women and the hero like with Anko in the chunin exam in the death forest or with Temari was so funny that it's brought me tears of laughter!!! Don't drop please!! Continue!!!
  • FanmanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The first fanfiction novel I've read. And beyond perfect. 2 years ago I was looking forward to the episodes coming. The author suddenly disappeared. Years later, I rediscovered it in RR. I really don't know what to say. I really loved this series and its main character. My favorite part was that the main character was plain and ordinary. With the Rinnegen,byakugan,system combo, an incredible, undefeated mc did not welcome us. I think the author probably quit because he didn't know how to end the series. Because in the last chapters, the story was quite detached from the original story. I am truly sad. It was a great parody of naruto.
  • Blank69007Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Really enjoyed this read love the crazy borderline villain mc ,wish the story could've kept going but all things come to an end.Yea there where some spelling mistakes but nothing that wouldn't deter someone who was enjoying the book.Very unique in that the MC is kinda a side character who rounds up other side characters (minus Sasuke) and tries to go against the script of the show.
  • boi the kingRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This fanfic if one of the best out there, better then most.
    It's been very entertaining so far. The MC isn't "godlike from birth" like a lot of fanfics, but rather very normal in both strength and knowledge. We have a lot of appropriate humor and original content.
    joke, its really resemble how my father do his prank in his early years. Another things is about eiji himself, who is literally annoying person but draw other to him
    Another one best about this story is the cover. Author even bother himself to put commision for it, showing how much he care about his own work.Other than many author that just pick random picture from google.
    Entertain reader ? Check
    Passion in writing ? Check
    Joke that make you laugh happily and imagine yourself seeing the scene directly
    Grammar: Readable
    Plot: It is simply too funny. I always have a great time
    My last words to end this shameless (definitely my words)
    Simply PERFECT. I've read similar novels, but none of them are as beautiful as this one. The only part I'm sorry about is that there are no 300-400 chapters.
    So I need 200 words :(
    It's basically everything I can want from story. Characters make sense and plot is fun and not predictable full of cliche. Thoughts of characters are things a person might think in the situation.
  • HeavenlySheitanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Sadly, he probably passed away.
    Rest in peace author.
    Cooking Instructions:
    1. Summon a Mixing Bowl: Preferably one forged in the fires of Mount Bake-More. If not available, your grandma’s bowl will do.
    2. Mix Dry Ingredients: Combine moonlight wheat, beard yeast, and unicorn horn dust. Stir with a wand (or spoon).
    3. Add Wet Ingredients: Crack phoenix eggs (they might resurrect—be quick), add oil, and chant “Rise, oh bread, rise!” with feeling.
    4. Knead: Beat the dough as if it just insulted your swordsmanship.
    5. Dragon Bake: Ask a local dragon to sneeze on it briefly. If unavailable, 450°F for 30 minutes works too.
    6. Orcish Guacamole: Mash the enchanted avocado while growling angrily. Add diced goblin chili and a single tear of regret from your last campaign.
    7. Serve Hot: Pair with ale, mead, or the tears of your dungeon master.
    ---
    Warning: May cause +2 to charisma and unexpected quests.
  • malinizgeldiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    For the first 100 episodes, of course. Then it started to go almost completely ridiculous. I laughed a lot in the first chapters and loved the author. It's also the first chapters that definitely make it readable. There are some who see mc as stupid but i think mc's personality is very good. I hoped it wouldn't completely change the universe like it did in the beginning, but the author just screwed up. I still recommend that you read it.
  • ManiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    this story can be a mess for sure, with poor/no editing and sometimes flimsy plotlines. And more jokes than sense, and they don't ALWAYS land.
    Despite this, i enjoy the story. Even as a non naruto fan.
    i think there is a good heart in this story. the characters feel good when they are conveyed properly (which they aren't always), and the humor that lands genuinely cracks me up.
    The story flip flops between absurd humor and heartfelt DETERMINATION. it's silly and bad and fun and gripping and cringy and encouraging all at once.
    the story definitely bears the marks of fast and sloppy writing. i think it could benefit a lot from proper editing and generally more time spent on it. but i also think it's unrealistic to ask for. i think the story can probably only exist as it does, because this is the way the author desires to express it. The way it is, the text feels close to the author, and you can almost see in the text when it's written in a silly joking mood, because it speeds up and quickly spirals into absurd hilarity.
    not my favorite story by far, but i like it. keep it up my guy.
    don't know if royal road is the place for this story, the standards and expectations are very different to a site like scribblehub where this was originally posted (i think?). so the reception here is a lot harsher ;-;