Mītut Qātē

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Description

"Who chooses to live a life of such strung together tragedies that it makes one think their very existence is made to test the endurance of one's own soul?"

The story of girl named Mītut Qātē as she navigates through her life and the many different experiences consistent of it; to ultimately determine her own place in this world and see if she is fit to continue toiling away against the troubles of man and lies of this existence.

Chapters published every 3 weeks on Thursday at 6AM UTC. So stay awhile, my dear reader.

Fiction on temporary hiatus, will continue as scheduledsooneventually.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2025
Author
Louis Pierre Sevilleno

Tags

FANTASYFEMALE LEADTRAGEDYDRAMASLICE OF LIFE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Views
1,209

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Elijah TalbotRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This story, to me, is a really interesting read. Though, before you continue reading this review. Just know that there might be some spoilers here and there.
    Before I continue, let's talk about the spelling and grammar. Grammar-wise wise this story is pretty solid. I barely found any problems, and I think this is structurally well written. As for style, I find it pretty difficult in some cases, as most paragraphs are 200 words long. Most of the time, I feel this breaks up the story and makes the pacing go all over the place. Which can make the reading experience not as enjoyable as it should.
    As for the story, I feel there is not a lot there at the moment. Essentially, it just started. As the story follows Mītut as she grows up during a famine and later runs away from home. However, you do feel a sense of direction as the story moves along. Even if the style does slow it down unnaturally. The same can be said with characters, as they don't feel as fleshed out (minus Mītut) as they should be. We are not introduced to a lot as well, but I do believe you will encounter more if the story continues.
    In the end, I think this is solid in its own way. Though flawed, I believe it will start being fleshed out the longer the story is being worked on.