Mirmoelnir the Wyvern

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Description

On Alpha, an earth-like planet, life has developed.I am a wyvern born in a Jurassic world but very colourful.Survival is difficult, especially when you are very small.This is my daily life.I have a thirst for adventure and one day my parents disappeared. A terrible witch took them away.Follow the adventures of Mirmoelnir, who is on a quest to find his parents with the help of his brothers and sisters.To make matters worse, he will have to face humans, dragon hunters and survive an encounter with humans from his home world who have come from Earth on an exploration ship. The choices will be difficult, as will the trials.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: The Devourer

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Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 68
Views: 53,914

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Community Reviews(2)

NerocarsonRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The plot is great and the story is good too, unfortunately the flow is very broken. I suggest you have someone edit for you to smooth it out. There's some confusion on the humans assuming main character is female bit the main character perspective claims to be male. The conversations and descriptions jump around a lot, you may want to work on your transitions.
Wolfy_PRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The idea of the story is interesting, sadly that's the only good thing I could say about it.
At first after reading about a half I started suspecting what story was written by an AI. There were no consistency on charter genders and names for example. The POV could change a couple of time during ONE dialogue what makes it really hard to follow what's going on and who thinks what.
Later in the notes the reason reveals itself, this is a translation and English is not the native author's language, but story was just translated via online translator without any editing or proofreading.
Maybe it's way better in the original language, but without proper editing, honestly just not worth it as it is.