MHA; Purple Charge

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Description

Due to his financial circumstances, and his distance from the UA Academy, Fulan was forced to enter the nearest academy in the hope of becoming a professional hero. But the director of that academy realized that Fulan's presence in that place did not suit him. A person with his talent should study in an academy like UA. For this reason, Fulan had a golden opportunity to transfer to UA, but the events of the sports festival were about to begin...

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: daoa Rou

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Rating: 2.3/ 5.0
Followers: 8
Views: 7,836

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Community Reviews(2)

Akito B. TakahashiRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Currently on a journey to review certain fanfics. And this one, my friends, has an interesting premise. We once again have a powerful protagonist forced to start at a lesser-hero academy. While I didn't enjoy My Hero Academy, the focus on this ff might fit those familiar with the anime.
However, the writing does need improvement. The dialogue can feel stilted, and the exposition is heavy-handed. Because Fulan is overpowered right away, his journey feels less engaging.
Rou would benefit from focusing on showing and not telling. Let action scenes reveal Fulan's personality. Build tension and intrigue rather than directly stating the events to come.
Refining the writing could definitely make this ff much more compelling—not saying it's poorly written or anything.
XourigRoyal Road
★ 0.5
This hurts the eyes.
I can't even try to appriciate the story or the characters because the writing is just too poor.
This is like a badly translated chinese novel.
I hope for your sake that you gentle men and gentle lady find a better story to read than this.