Metal Elemental

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

dnajester

• CHAPTER 2 Vision of Doom
  Jun 22, 2018
• CHAPTER 1 When the Earth was Torn Asunder
  Jun 21, 2018
• Prologue - I Remember
  Jun 19, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Lord JoydeRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Maybe I was too hopefull when I saw the word "elemental" in the title but...
  What I wanted was a story about a living pile of metal travelling the world and getting into all sorts of interesting situations.
  Instead, what I got was just another DUNGEON story in the making. Pfft.
  Anyways, here's the review as of right now~ (2chapters in so DO TAKE THIS WITH A GRAIN OF SALT) --> I may modify the review depending on how this goes as the story has managed to catch my interest somewhat, at least.
  Now then: S P O I L E R S  A H E A D
  Style --> nonexistent.
  Grammar --> I can't say I've found any glaring grammatical mistakes but I simply must deduct a star for that prologue.
  Story --> just another Dungeon story with a semi-interesting twist to it. That is to say, the MC (or one of them) is a being of metal instead of the usual slime/skeleton. It might become worth a read, it might not.
  Characters --> One thing that struck me with this fiction even as it only has 2 chapters so far is how... alive?, the characters are. So good on you author! This is the reason why I'm going to continue to read this despite being overfed on dungeon stories.