Merchant Core
Self-Published
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Description
A young adventurer, Kristofer Storm, starts his adventure in the empire, where there are 7 kingdoms and Kris starts in Frostland, where the winter is eternal. He wants to keep his father's legacy and go to the capital kindowm find luxurys.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- G.Santos
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 187
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Felicidade_8Royal Road★★★★ 4.0I would rate it 4 out of 5 stars. The first chapter sets a solid foundation for the story with an intriguing introduction to Kris and his world. The dialogue is natural, and the characters feel authentic, especially in their interactions and the subtle hints at their backstories. The setting is described in a way that makes it easy to picture the environment, and there’s a good balance of mystery and character development. However, the chapter could benefit from a bit more tension or a stronger hook to make the reader eager to continue. Overall, it’s a promising start with potential for a compelling narrative ahead.