A blank page, an unwritten story. That has the most potential. To be mutated, changed, to evolve above what was thought possible, that is the mind of a mage. What will this mind become, broken and misshapen, or strong enough to hold the weight of the world, it all depends on fate.

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UnmotivatedwizardRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

First off, I'll be completely transparent in saying that this review is not objective, and I do not claim in any way to be an objective arbitrater for the quality of this title, however, I think my assessments will be a good general indicator for whether or not you'll like this. In the spirit of good faith, I'd like to split my assessment of this into different categories and give my view of how all these story elements work on their own before I highlight how they fit together.
Concept-4/5: Its simple, but interesting. Nothing that hasn't been done before with the magic school/stat multiplying abilities of the MC, but its the execution that counts in my opinion, and there's a lot of room for things to grow from here.
Characters-3/5: Early days so not very much to say here, though it does seem that the author has some general direction for the characters and how they are intended to develop, which is more than what can be said for many amateur writers.
Cohesion/ease of reading-5/5: The author clearly knows how to use words economically and balance the content of updates so as not to bog down every single chapter with mountains of unnecessary word vomit, which I heavily appreciate. I think many readers would appreciate this simplicity and straightforwardness in the writing of this novel as its one of the biggest problems I see in so many others.
Immersion/personal investment-2/5: This is where I personally get a bit lost, as I see this as the greatest weakness of the story. The earlier simplicity I mentioned kind of comes back to bite itself in that while I can go through the events very easily, I don't feel much investment in anything. The ideas used are good, but their presentation sparks no great curiosity in me, and this could very well be due to my personal opinion. I would be the first to admit that I am already very jaded by stories in this genre and have a tendency to gloss over some setup when I see tropes I am heavily used to, but something about the writin

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