Melissa's Stone
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
a wholesome story of a little girl finding a magic rock
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Zak Edlund
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 200
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This story is about Melissa finding a stone and going back to get it. The prose is pretty simple, but the detail of getting ready and other little interactions did not add much to the story and caused it to be bogged down in pacing. With it being unbalanced the hunt for the stone and the conclusion came up as a bit rushed, giving this a rather weak ending.