Our main character is pulled through her bathroom mirror and into other dimensions where she must encounter her counterparts in an effort to get back to her own dimension.

I wrote this several years ago, please keep this in mind while you read :)

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★★★★ 4.0

I don't see any reason why this story is rated so low. The half-star is straight unfair. Idk who rates with such low marks without even telling why is just straight rude.
The story itself is good but it was not exactly what I would pick for reading myself. For that very reason, it wasn't light reading for me but I can't say it was bad. By any means.
The style throughout the story is consistent but the lack of breaks makes it hard to read sometimes. In some parts transition of viewpoints is chaotic (again. Lack of breaks like ••• or whatever you pick)
The story itself is solid and very well overlayed. However, little chaos in formatting influences the story's clarity.
In the grammar part, I can't say a bad word. I'm not a native speaker or expert but I don't find any part particularly messy. There was nothing to break my immersion so that should be appreciated by anyone when they read a story.
Characters are always the part where I hate rate most if I haven't read the whole story. Characters have this tendency to change during the course of the story so rationing them early on is unfair. However, up till now, characters are believable and what's more, have room to grow or fall.
Summarising the story "Me, Myself, and I" by Miss Nomer is a good piece of work that deserves a much better fate than being rated as a half-star ... Something. On the contrary. If reached by a broader audience I'm fully convinced it can be appreciated by many people. With full conviction and putting a warning label read up to chapter 7, but I can recommend it for reading.
Just give it a try yourself.

Me, Myself, and I

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