Maygan 4: Demon Huntress

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**I've been busy, so sorry for the slow updates. I have a couple chapters almost ready!**

Her pleasantries and professional rigor are but a veil to hide the shame of her past. A darkness speaks to her but is she willing to listen?

A untethered employee who holds the key to the universe but couldn't fight his way out of a wet paper bag.

A madman turned CEO desperate to regain dignity even if the price is the destruction of the universe.

Maygan 4finds herself in an unfamiliar world but can always count on her ancient samurai swords Hon and Koga, super-human strength, and Victorian age etiquette to solve any problem. In this story,Maygan battles demons, AI spies, rogue androids, to save the human race from catastrophe.Can Maygan uncover the secrets of Automatomics and cleanse the forces of darkness before it’s too late?

This story is meant to be fun, so enjoy. It's also WIP, so if you have time leave some comments so I can improve the story and my technique.

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Sea ChangeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Toilet humor, dad jokes, and the existential dread of postmodern postcapitalist corporate culture no worse than The Office.  Now with demons, grossly violnet, gore, and missed cross communication and impersonation.  It's not at all clear if Megan is delusional, the normals are delusional or if it even matters.  Could be a slow setup like Moliere does, and it certainly has unity of stage in that it all happens within one building at one time in that french style.
    Style: A goofy gory magical madcap romp through a disfunctional corporation.  Turn your soap opera lenses all the way up to eight.
    Story: A well set up farce of three different common story tropes.  There is the samurai story with the magical swords crossed with highlander only enough for one, there is the horror of working for a company not because it does anything good or benefits you but because you have to, and a full-on demon invasion backed by a mysterious eternal foozle.
    Grammar: Not too many mispellings.  Good paragraph structure.  Easy to follow idea structures.
    Characters:  This is a crazy farce where the action and the humor dominate and the characters follow the stories that they think that they are in and not necessarily THIS story.  So characters remain two-dimensional, and this is just as well.