Maybe it would have been a good idea not to wish for a harem? Completed

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Mackay and Seff were two typical high school boys, happily making grandiose fantasies about their future relationships with girls.

Of course, in reality, neither knew a single girl to even talk to, let alone do anything more.

So, one day, in one of their reality free discussions, they each made a wish for a harem.

They got their wishes. Sort of...

Things get complicated. Very complicated.

They may come to regret their wishes.

Oh, they also get mixed up with at bit of a police procedural.

This story has multiple characters and multiple Points of View. Every POV change is clearly marked with a new header. Inside each POV section, the POV character’s thoughts are initalics.

This fiction is fully written and proof read (that is, a poor man’s proof read with the help of Word). It comes to about 90,000 words (about 330 RoyalRoad pages). It will be published in 19 chapters, roughly one chapter per day.

Reviews and comments are much appreciated. And if you actually read all the way to the end, I will be extremely grateful if you could post a comment saying so. After all, the whole point of me publishing this is to share the story with at least one other person, and to know about it.

And, yes, I don’t have any graphic artist skills. How did you guess?

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Status
Completed
Year
2019

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
42
Views
30,992

Chapters(21 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • CrywolfsevenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The name of the storybook is a bit lackluster and doesn’t really encapsulate the true essence of this story. This story is about how you need to be careful what you wish for as wishes, much like life itself, rarely turn out like we hope. The story starts out a bit slow and odd and at first the characters were honestly a bit over bearing with the female MCs being harsh and spiteful while the male MC was passive and apologetic. Though after only a few chapters we begin to see just why these characters are so harsh and we see multiple broken and fractured individuals brought together to form a rather unique family. I am very invested in these characters now and am strongly looking forward to where it goes next.