Masters

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Description

NOTICE: Upon greater contemplation, I have decided to put this story on indefinate hiatus so as to focus on other projects. However, I have decided to start a new project in it's Place.

In an infinite universe full of endless possibility, there lie worlds beyond compare, treasures and resources with great power, monsters that never truly die, and peoples of all kinds with mysterious powers and abilities that can be learned like a martial art. Join Nicholas Xed and his friends as they blaze a trail into the unknown to meet their destinies!

Note from Author: This is the first time i've done something like this and as such is a huge learning experience on my part, so please be patient with me if I make revisions. I promise I won't change any of the core narratives or characterizations and will do my best to make this the best story it can be!

Note 2: This is a montly serialization without a fixed day in each month, so please expect every new chapter to come within the frame of each month.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: ShadowDurza

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 6
Views: 4,910

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

CashireCatRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Read until chapter 8.
The story is not exactly bad, but it is extremely mundane and overly detailed to the point of boredom.
Grammar:
Can´t say that I have found and relevant problems with Grammar and readability.
Character:
The usual Shounen character who will help a little girl because she lost her puppy without reward.
Similarly, even if somebody wants to harm him, he will let that person off after he has defeated them without any consequences.
And of course he is an expert in athleticism and can already use "Aura" because his father was somebody special. Furthermore, he is super honest and upright.
I wouldn´t say that it is a bad character, but this type of characters are just not my type and annoy me extremely. If you like those then he is quite realistic in his role.
Story/Style:
Nothing special. Just a guy with a mysterious father who goes to the most prestigious "Master" school of all with a goal that is considered unattainable.
But all those details. bruh
Every single chapter is full of information about monsters and what you can do with them, how his father has showed him how to use Aura, or the backstory of a completely unimportant ship captain. How he learned to be a top athlete or how exactly something looks like.
It´s just way too much to the point where I over jumped roughly 60% of each chapter. It was quite a chore to read through all that.