Mastermind
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Alexis Stone was a man of dreams, Yet, when dreams become unreachable what was left? Cold?Sadness? Anger? Nothing was left of Alexis Stone, after he was sentenced to 200 years of Virtual Reality, After Killing 200,000 Innocent people, For his dreams. Jump To the story of Mastermind AKA Alexis stone as he trys to live in a fantasy VrMMoRPG Afterlife.Note: This is my first time writing a novel so good pointers are appreciatedNote: English is my second language so please, notify in the comments for grammar mistakes
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Troller Fi
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 16
- Views
- 7,973
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- 6paths4321Royal Road★★ 1.5The MC just went from Evil to Good it just doesn't make sense at all. It also doesn't explain why he killed that much people. Also the side characters are complete assholes that are not supposed to be given that privilege to become Gods. At first I thought the MC would be a villain then wallah the author decides to just change it and not make a poll.
- HarlequinRoyal Road★★ 1.5I said it in the title of the review. There is a wisp of a good idea somewhere in those 3 chapters. Really just enough to take a short breathe. Chapter 1 was sub par, we do not get to know our MC before his memory wipe, and all the side characters are cardboard assholes. Chapter 2 is an aborted child who had potential, the AI Siegfried must have a small IQ, or have serious lag. Second the story needs a tutorial, not a memory wipe and kick in the paints. 3 chapter, seems sub par and nonsensical again.