Master of Dreams

Self-Published

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Description

Visdre Mallaichte was someone with below average intelligence. His entire life, he had struggled to understand what made him so different from everyone else. He had no friends, family, or support. But he didn't let that stop him from pursuing what he enjoyed.

But he had a secret he told nobody.

While others dream randomness. He always has the exact same dream.

He dreamed of being in a white room with a weird book. The books title was something he couldn't understand at all. The content of the book was entirely blank. He had always had this dream.

But one day...this dream changed.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: HASHARAHHA14

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Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Views: 123

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FiddlesoupRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This review is an advanced review for a review swap at 10k words
Character: this story has a very unique character. He's unintelligent almost forest Gump levels, and knows it. He's unhappy with his life and encounters a story written (by the author) that grants him access to an idle-gane like cultivation system that makes him more intelligent. I love this idea and I couldn't put it down once I got through a couple of weak introduction chapters. I wish there were more character interactions, but I love and feel for the MC.
Story: I'm a huge fan of idle clickers and the like, and this does a great job of hitting what makes idle games great without being a bore. I wish I had thought of it because I've always wanted to write a book like this!
Grammar: this is the biggest flaw. The early chapters need a lot of work; however none of the grammar detracted from my ability to read or enjoy the story.
Style: I'm caught here. The style is simple, and not my general cup of tea, but it felt very similar to reading the Forrest Gump book and did a fantastic job of capturing the thought process of the MC.my hope is that as the character progresses the style does too, but I have not seen it yet.