Marvel's Phantom
Self-Published
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Description
Dying sucks. Waking up in a world filled with Aliens, Gods, and Monsters sucksx2. Learning that I'm technically still dead, well that takes the cake.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- heavens_monarch
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 491
- Views
- 52,385
Chapters(10 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Gamph MadolRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am not usually fond of fan fiction, but that is because it is often of poor quality and not imaginative in itself. This fiction has neither problem.
The world is clearly described, presented and thought out, with characters that feel natural and seem to belong in the narration. The effect of clunky caricatures that don’t quite fit together that fan fiction often has is completely absent. Instead, it seems like a well understood world with fully formed characters in a distinct plot, which just happens to be based off the Marvel content.
I am writing this after reading chapter 5, so I cannot vouch for how the stories quality will progress. However, events and interactions feel natural so far, and things are presented in a way that does not rely on an interest in or knowledge of Marvel. - mask19Royal Road★★★★ 3.5The basic premise would be what if a person is isekai'd into a mutant in the Marvel Universe with all the powers of Danny Phantom from Nickelodean. This MCU in this story seems to include all charaters in Marvel including mutants, fantastic 4, and eventual avengers (author makes it clear this is before the first Iron Man movie). One should not make the mistake of think the MC is Danny Phantom though. He does appear to be amoral and does not have any qualms of killing a villian
Its an interesting idea and I am interested to see where it would go. I am also curious to see how the character will develop. To what extent will he go to divert his timeline from the original MCU timeline? - pewpewcachooRoyal Road★★ 2.0Honestly I wanted to like the story, but it just doesn't feel believable to me... I get it, it's a fan fic mash up of a cartoon show and comic books. But that doesn't mean it can't be written in a more believable way. It just pulls you out of that story otherwise. The writing actually seems okay for the most part, besides the grocery store check list that is the first chapter. The grammar is also okay. The story is okay, just lacking.