Martial World
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Description
Rebirth or Reborn means a second chance to life or a second chance to change a life ?Who said Heavens give them a second chance ?Who doesn't believe in rebirth is a idiot ! But of course all the world is full with idiots who only have strength and power.A Young man who is in his early twenties and has finally achieved the Realm who many cultivators seek The Immortal Realm died but will he just let it go like that?--------------There will be sexual content with time , gore and swearing .*CURRENTLY GETTING EDITED * *ENDING IN A MONTH AT MOST *
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- AVL
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 2,603
Chapters(28 total)
- 06 - Punches, Kicks, and OpportunityNov 16, 2020
- 05 - Boredom Is A B*tchNov 12, 2020
- 04 - Being People Is HardMar 11, 2020
- 03 - A Big Fall and Bigger ShockMar 11, 2020
- 02 - And So The Adventure Begins, Also System(Sorta)Dec 25, 2019
- 01 - How I became A Cultivator and Didn't Know ItSep 27, 2019
- Chapter 20 - Ending of the cold cultivation !Jan 16, 2016
- Chapter 19 - Cold CultivationJan 15, 2016
- Chapter 18-Returning To The Royal AcademyJan 14, 2016
- Chapter 17 - The Three Tests (Part 2 )Jan 13, 2016
- Chapter 16 -The Three Tests (Part 1)Jan 12, 2016
- Chapter 15 - The Truth Realm Demonic BeastJan 12, 2016
- Chapter 14 - The LakeJan 11, 2016
- Chapter 13 - The Demonic Mountain TrainingJan 10, 2016
- Chapter 12 - The Fight Till Death !Jan 9, 2016
- The RealmsJan 9, 2016
- Chapter 11 - Do You Dare To Accept !Jan 9, 2016
- Chapter 10 - A FriendJan 8, 2016
- Chapter 9 - The System And The WayJan 7, 2016
- Chapter 8 - The Royal AcademyJan 7, 2016
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Community Reviews(4)
- ashtonRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Pretty good not too many grammar mistakes but not enough development of characters and MC should face more struggles to get stronger not just have it handed to him
- AziroFFRoyal Road★★★ 3.0it has good potential but you still got a lot to work on it....small chapters,to much information and little action and grammar mistakes
if you at least try to fix some of them i will change my review,this story can be great but will you let it be great?
keep it going - ILoveAnimeRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I can't say its a good story but its a good read. Story is without much substance and through without going into details of places and characters. Info bombs can be used as separate reminder for stuff, but it isn't really good way to introduce stuff.
Grammar isn't that good but I don't really mind that as long as there isn't any major flaws.
Story needs more thought on on character building, feel of environment and how you give the information. But as a first time (which I assume this is) FF its good effort, I enjoy it but can't say I like or hate it. - sabethunder8Royal Road★★★ 2.5-1/2 the chapters are too short
-1/2 You are giving too much information too fast with very little development to even the main character
-1 It falls in the mold and shows nothing new to the genre
-1/2 Bad grammar
How to improve
1. make each chapter at least 2000 words long not characters, words
2. show emotion with moods and tones in the story
3.don’t create useless 2d side characters for only one purpose
4. Your story only needs simple edits for the grammar, but lots of simple edits so just read over the chapter at least twice before releasing (too much “has”)