Man in white
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
For the RR Magazine Contest.
A story written for the RR Magazine Contest.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Sealed Archmagus
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 357
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0There is not much story in this until the very end as it begins with some well-written action sequence. A lot of elements are introduced quickly, on in particular that bothered me was the nanites as source of basically magic. I get that, but having someone's heart go to 600 bpm is a bit silly. It is a good premise and I see this was written for the magazine according to the blurb. It could use some copyediting to clean up the prose. If this gets continued let me know.