Making magic, Forging fame.

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Contrast

• Impatience.
  Jun 27, 2017
• Practice of two.
  Jun 11, 2017
• Plan of defence.
  Jun 6, 2017
• An amount of risk.
  Jun 4, 2017
• Side effects.
  May 29, 2017
• Enchanting.
  May 28, 2017
• The red fox in the mirror.
  May 26, 2017
• Reactions
  May 26, 2017
• Late for a lesson
  May 26, 2017
• Myth and lore.
  May 24, 2017
• To be two people.
  May 23, 2017
• The young.
  May 23, 2017
• Talk of healing.
  May 22, 2017
• Accusations.
  May 22, 2017
• Medicine and soup.
  May 17, 2017
• To draw blood.
  May 15, 2017
• Flames of metal.
  May 12, 2017
• To forge.
  May 11, 2017
• The path away.
  May 9, 2017
• To spell the soul and call the spirit
  May 7, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• TheLoserEllimistRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I wasn't planning to give the story any stars until the story is longer and I've read it. But it seems I have to in order to comment? So I am giving it a neutral 3 star and I'll change it when the story gets to Page 10, or I deem it developed enough for me to do so (If my comment has more or less than 3 stars, you know this is old news). That said, the story shows promise and I am following it.
  Grammar: There are a few typos but they are easily ignored. There are also a few sentences that could be attributed more clearly but it's more than acceptable at this stage.
  Character development is still in the early stages but it seems like the author is actually planning to develop the character and from what I've read, I like both where he is taking things and how is doing so.
  The world setting is still being exposed, but the begining of it looks promising. Personally, I hope it doesn't become another op MC who fights for fightings sake and so on but as the adventure is still being exposed, and there is clearly a mystery re: the MC's origins, well anything is possible I suppose.
  Overall, it's like I said in the title, promising.