Make Way for the Villainess

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Description

A famous actress wakes up in a room surrounded by luxurious things, but her maid calls her by a different name,Lady Frencheska. She recalls her dream and realizes that it reflects her original life. Despite achieving success, she feels like her parents have used her for their selfish purposes. As she looks at herself in the mirror, she realizes that her appearance matches that of the antagonist in a novel she had read. Overwhelmed by this revelation, she falls to the floor, remembering that the antagonist meets a gruesome end. Her maid rushes to her side, but they are interrupted by the entrance of four soldiers. A man, filled with disgust and hatred, orders them to be taken away. The maid defends the antagonist, but they are both apprehended. The man accusesLady Frencheskaof attempting to kill the crown prince, leaving her shocked and pale, as she realizes this is the part of the story where the antagonist is supposed to die.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Se54

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Rating: 3.3/ 5.0
Followers: 24
Views: 21,131

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Blue09Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
4 Stars. I kinda like the story, also its not new, i kinda got a taste for these by now.
Detrimental is that the story... jumps, for a better word. The 'scenes' arent truly fluid, instead they kinda jump from one to the next. It makes it a bit... jarring(?)... towards immersion when reading it.
Being a none native speaker, my english isnt the best, but even i understand that reading this story isnt something for 'gramma nazis', they will flipp the board and starting a shouting contest. xD
But still, as a whole, i do kinda enjoy the story, so i give 4 stars in hope the author will continue the story and improve on himself while doing so. Not that it is the most likely, mind you, as the chapter release is rather... slow? (So not talking about the improvement, but about this story getting to the finishing line ^^) We'll see if there will be more in the future i guess. :-)