Magus Lordavis conceives Another Plot

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

A Meaner Kith

• Chapter 18: In which there are snacks and a stroll outdoors
  Jun 23, 2021
• Chapter 17: In which a celebration is held and the dungeon is put to use
  Jun 15, 2021
• Chapter 16: In which shortcomings are revealed and a monumental decision made
  Jun 14, 2021
• Chapter 15: In which tempers are lost and tantrums are thrown
  Jun 8, 2021
• Chapter 14: In which a variety of bedside chats occur
  Jun 2, 2021
• Chapter 13: In which Magus Lordavis has no perspective
  Jun 2, 2021
• Chapter 12: In which a champion stops by and a lake mystery proves to be something more
  May 31, 2021
• Chapter 11: In which communication is tested, successors discussed, and memories reminisced
  May 30, 2021
• Chapter 10: In which there are worms in the bath and a brief brawl takes place
  May 28, 2021
• Chapter 9: In which topography is discussed and a nemesis arrives with abnormal tidings
  May 26, 2021
• Chapter 8: In which the first council meeting of the Kingdom of Ever-Worms is conducted
  May 24, 2021
• Chapter 7: In which a new arrival brings new changes
  May 24, 2021
• Chapter 6: In which everyone ventures somewhere
  May 23, 2021
• Chapter 5: In which there is lengthy discussion. Very lengthy discussion.
  May 22, 2021
• Chapter 4: In which a queen speaks in confidence and a prisoner demonstrates wondrous science
  May 22, 2021
• Chapter 3: In which a lovely evening is shared by all and a proposal is proposed
  May 20, 2021
• Chapter 2: In which there is brooding and a poor sense of direction sets events in motion
  May 19, 2021
• Chapter 1: In which the fifty-seventh plot against Fourmikari is brought to an end
  May 18, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• DartmorinRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The story is tagged as anti-hero, but the MC as presented up to now is more obsessed B-movie villain. Not in a hammy adorable way, but in the pure stupid evil way. That can serve as the basis of an interesting story, the beginnings of which can be seen here, but to me is somehwat uncomfortable. Their evilness is plainly demonstrated, not just stated, but the demonstrations aren't gratuitous.
  There are of course hints that there is more to the character. By the fact that the story is also tagged as Satire, one can of course make any number of deductions about the future of sthe story, but at the moment, three chapters in, there are the foundations of any number of possible variations of standard plotlines and the possibility of something new.
  What it certainly has is the uniqueness factor of the undead faction not being demons or undead, but instead worms. What little it is possible to show of them in three chapters does set them apart from the standard fare.
  The style fits to what is presented. I wouldn't say it's anything special though.
  The grammar is impecable, or at least as far as I was able to notice.