Magic hand
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A story of a small person in a big country seeking spiritual freedom in a desperate social reality.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Lynn Drolet
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 216
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The narration and prose makes this awkward, even the beginning paragraphs do not make a lot of sense. Even the opening "When the sound of the train's bones neighing came from afar..." that doesn't make sense and context is needed. The rest of the line doesn't do much more. It comes as a mixed jumble that doesn't flow and it is awkward every other paragraph. With some editing it could sound more natural.